Reviews for Despair
WolfofthePine chapter 1 . 8/21/2013
Awh! Sweet!
Muffin'sback chapter 1 . 7/17/2011
You gotta love the last minute confession!
Scarlett Rogue chapter 1 . 5/30/2011
Very cute story, I have to say it's one of the best Chulu fics I've read!

One small suggestion, though: It's probably a good idea for you to revise this. There are a number or grammatical errors and errors of word usage and placement. It's not too distracting, but it would make your fic much stronger.

Besides that, you did a great job! Thanks for sharing! :)
defunct1 chapter 1 . 9/23/2009
Cute.
Blue-Eyed Chica chapter 1 . 9/3/2009
aw cute! besides the whole malnourished sulu...that isnt exactly CUTE per say
januaryfreeze92 chapter 1 . 9/3/2009
Aww, that was so freaking adorable. Great job!
Masterchibisukechan chapter 1 . 9/2/2009
aw, that was cute!
SeventhTatar chapter 1 . 8/19/2009
Dang, who wouldn't want to crush Pavel to the wall and kiss the life out of him? lol! i think this is so cute, but poor Sulu, losing his appetite over being lovesick!

Tiny something, right in the second line you used "wrote" but it needed to be "written" i don't know if that was just a typo, but just in case...

Wrote is like, "I wrote that so quickly that it is messy"

Written is like, "I had written a story last week, but I can't find it now"

It is almost ALWAYS "had written" or "have written"

good lord, now that i have written the word "written" so many times it just looks like a jumble of letters instead of a word. like when you say a word over and over and it loses its meaning D:
Mutt Winchester chapter 1 . 8/19/2009
AW! It was cute! Sulu having the guts to kiss Chekov was so cute! Keep writing!

Salima Master of Light

p.s. 'Well clearly they're all morons'. -that line was genius, pure genius!