|Reviews for Dark Angel Yami|
| iris pennings chapter 14 . 2/6/2016
i love this story!
i love the the beast idea
its like the golden compas movie
but this story is so much better
i hope you can make for of it
i really love it
im a big fan of this
| puppyface1000 chapter 14 . 7/21/2015
awesome story you should do a squeal to it.
| mykkia.worthington.7 chapter 4 . 8/23/2014
I love this i cant get enough of it!' I cant even stop thinking about it! Eee!
*back in yugi's soul room*
Yugi: i garentee yami will drool over this outfit! Hehehe! He'll be like puddy in my hand! * dressed in white short shorts and a sleeveless lilac shirt and tennis shoes with leg warmers..calls mentaly* (ooohh yyaaammii! Mind comeing over for a minute?)
Yami: (Sure aibou i'll be there in a minute) * minute afterwards yami knocks on yugi's door and he answers*
Yugi: Thanks for coming over yami!...uuummm...is there something wrong? * gives a innocent and questioning look *
Yami: * snaps out of daze *..uuhhh! rrr! N-nothings wrong aibou u needed me? * walks in *
Yugi: Yeah i wanted to tell u something moru hitori no boku! * shuts door and streches a little an noticing yami staring * * grins * ...u know yami...* presses up against yami *...its all urs if u want it...
Yami: ... * gulps nervously and starts ravishing yugi in kisses *
| forgotten truth124k chapter 14 . 6/20/2014
love the idea chapters seand a bit short and vag but i feel it could become so much more
| Erin Mae Wilby chapter 14 . 7/30/2013
You could make yami become a gold angel the rarest angel ever. Then a battle happenes because the evil spirit beasts want yami because he has a great power and pregnant with yugi child even though he's male. In the end yami has a girl and goes through a ultimate transformation better then Yugi's.
| Dehmer chapter 14 . 11/24/2012
Hee hee...public Yami x yugi yaoi sex? COUNT ME IN! Lolz Love the ending. I will treasure this forever and ever by...(drumroll)...FAVORITING IT! XD
| Dehmer chapter 11 . 11/24/2012
Why cute, innocent Ryou! You monster!
| Dehmer chapter 9 . 11/24/2012
Seems the pics fast for my liking...oh well! I will stick with it! XD
| Dehmer chapter 4 . 11/24/2012
"That can easily be arranged!" ...HAHAHAHA Too good!
| Echo Hikari chapter 3 . 11/2/2012
Hikari: Wait what the...
Hikari: WEIRD BUT INTERESTING OH AND WEIRD IN A GOOD WAY!
| Echo Hikari chapter 2 . 11/2/2012
Hikari: *Giggles and glomps whoever wrote this* YOU MADE MY DAY!
Seiji: *Sighs* Okay okay they know
Seiji and Hikari: Great story.
Hikari: YUP *Nuzzles the writer* Omg I FREAKING LOVE YOU FOR WRITING THIS!
Seiji: You said that to the teacher who gave you candy
| Nekoyasha12 chapter 14 . 10/13/2011
That was incredibly beautiful! ;w;
Cheesy beyond all belief, but wonderful nonetheless!
I absolutely loved the way you had Tristan and Joey meet Yugi! XD I can so picture them being all bad-ass like that!
And Yugi being the silver angel, I so say they one coming the moment the darkness mentioned it, but it was still wicked seeing (well, reading but when I get truly engrossed into a story it started seeming like I'm watching a show rather then reading a story) him become that legendary spirit beast!
And his full Angel of Light/Hope form was surer beautiful!
I know this is a long-shot, but... If there's every a time, do you think you could possible make a sequel with like Mai, Seto, Marik, Rex, Weevil, etc. and base it on Yugi getting pregnant (MPreg-ish) seeing as he's not truly human it could so be possible and work based on the story here to back it up!
Nevertheless, outstanding story, cheesy and all! X3
| Shinseina aoi hono Fenikkusu chapter 3 . 2/14/2011
wait so Yami doesnt have a dick nor a pussy
| A non a miss chapter 14 . 1/2/2010
This is a pretty good story. I thought it moved a bit too fast but I think I understand why. I liked the fact the Yugi got to top kind of. This story reminds me of Fate/Stay Night a little bit. The similarities I see are: the symbol on the hand and the whole partern concept. While I think there's probably room for improvement, this is still a good story and it is definitely worth reading. Thank you for writing this, it is very enjoyable.
| FMA-YGOfangirl chapter 14 . 12/13/2009
ok im going to make this short and sweet... it might have been a short story but it was AWESOME! PLZ WRITE MORE! THE STORY IS AWESOME!CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE OF YOUR STUFF!