|Reviews for Harvest Moon|
| Tmitidlover0412 chapter 73 . 10h
I read The story in about five days I absolutely love love loved it! In the beginning I was a little slow for me I cannot wait to read full moon rising and the prologue had me hooked
! great storytelling!
| Tmitidlover0412 chapter 47 . 8/31
That chapter was HORRIBLE!
| Guest chapter 73 . 8/4
Best ever, thank you for continuing what ms. Meyer didn't. But she has enough money now so why bother, right! You deserve a million for this book, thanks, Steph
| lesuse chapter 60 . 7/22
Edward now knows what it felt like to be Charlie when he left Bella. Masterful writing April! I didn't remember this happening either - poor Jacob. Honestly, I wondered at the wisdom of Jacob's proposal during such a time of stress.
| lesuse chapter 49 . 7/22
Love this Leah - all grown up and mature, still a strong personality but not bitter! Forgot about the Gabe connection! What goes around, comes around - take that Sam and Emily! Oh H_ _ _ is right!
| lesuse chapter 48 . 7/22
OK, much better! Poor little Gabe. We know someone whose little one had Reye's. It's a scary, scary syndrome. It made us all afraid to even have aspirin in the house when our children were little! OK, Henry is starting to make me freak a little bit with his declarations of vengeance! Nessie too, seems to be allowing her inner beast to emerge in this area! I remember enough about this story to know that LOTS more drama is ahead!
| lesuse chapter 47 . 7/22
OH MY GOD! I remember this now! I can't believe I forgot you did this! Oh thank goodness. . . I should probably go to sleep now and put this aside until tomorrow before the story pulls me in again and I spend yet another night reading incredible FF and am a zombie at work tomorrow. . . hmmmm. . . maybe just one more chapter. :)
| lesuse chapter 46 . 7/22
This is my second reading of this story! I realize that I had forgotten much of the plot as I'm rereading. I do remember. . . that the ending of this chapter gave me goose bumps - in a BAD way! Every parent's worst nightmare! And, I was going to read just one more chapter before going to bed! No stopping now. . .
| lesuse chapter 35 . 7/20
I hope I've said this in other reviews, but April, you should be getting a lot of money for the quality of writing you share with us! You capture the essence of, and flesh out the very likable characters that SM introduced to us in Twilight. You reveal to us the depth of their relationships in a very believable way. This is another incredible chapter - Edward and Carlisle fully revealed to one another. . . can two walk together except they be agreed? Finally, they are in agreement!
| lesuse chapter 34 . 7/20
I am so glad you love both boys in Twilight! It's hard to see Jacob demonized just because he cared for Bella! These last couple are some of my favorite chapters - OK, I know I said that about a couple of other chapters, but I have lots of favorites! These chapters where Edward comes to peace with who he is and Who loves him are so special. I hope all your readers feel the love of the Creator thru your words. I love the humor in this chapter - everyone caving to Fang, Fang arrogantly following Esme after she chewed out Emmett for tracking mud on the carpet, loved the Abominable SnowEmmett - can just see someone doing that! The gift giving is inspirational, and does it get any better than Jacob kissing his "odor" all over Rose! Sweet, shyster Alice - can just see her in front of a computer with a visor pulled over her forehead and one lightbulb dangling from the ceiling, as she maniacally makes the entire family outrageously rich! Wish I had an Aunt Alice! The Christmas Carol and Bella's dream is hauntingly sad - I just can't read it again - but I remember it was beautifully written! Merry Christmas in July!
| lesuse chapter 20 . 7/19
Okay, I have to add an addendum to my previous review. . . This is ALSO one of the greatest chapters in any story I've ever read. Wonderful story. . .*tears streaming* Rest in peace Billy. . .
| lesuse chapter 19 . 7/19
This is one of the BEST chapters I have ever read in any book or story, except for the Bible. Your gift is incredible! What a story! This is my second read thru of this story and I couldn't remember the title or author's name who gave us Henry. So glad I found it again in FF.
| Comrade'sRoza chapter 69 . 4/17
Another great story...you are an amazing writer. I absolutely loved Henry and the twist in the end where he hid his thoughts were awesome.
| TWINS96 chapter 5 . 12/30/2014
Lmao even if he did tell hwr before i doubt sge would have taken it seriously. She never did haha. Every time Edward has given her information on how guys are attracted to her she always pushed it like it was nada lol
| anna chapter 1 . 11/20/2014
I devoured this entire story within a week. It was awesome and i felt you completed the challenge well. The only criticism i have which i hope doesn't follow me ino reading the sequel is the authors notes on every single chapter. I download this as one epub file to read, and the authors notes kind of stop the readers flow, especially to thank the same betas, . chapter. At one point i had to load the file back onto the computer so i could delete the notes, then put it back on my tablet to read...
I write as well so i know how crucial good beta readers are to the story and i appreciate you trying to convey that to them, however a long authors note at the beginning or end or a dedication, or even mention in the summary would have sufficed.