Reviews for Whirlpool of the Mist
Guest chapter 6 . 2/6
Right longer chapters
Guest chapter 8 . 12/28/2016
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WHITE TIGER 910 chapter 7 . 8/30/2015
What bout the next? This chapter was amazing
yindragonkiba chapter 8 . 1/19/2015
Cliffy
AJGuardian chapter 8 . 7/7/2013
Well,this is a pain in the ass. Good story so far, but what about an update? ITS BEEN MORE THAN TWO YEARS!
Kittens Kat chapter 8 . 4/24/2013
BLOOD N GUTS GALORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE UPDATE SOON! THANK YOU!
Guest chapter 8 . 4/4/2013
moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Clove15 chapter 1 . 3/6/2013
Awsome Dan and Nawaki are alive yes! I hate Danzo thew
StrongGuy159 chapter 8 . 12/17/2012
Cool story continue please.
Takeshi no Otogakure chapter 8 . 12/13/2012
Ugh, only if you continued this story I would have loved it so much more *sighs*
HellScythe chapter 3 . 11/28/2012
you can write but your wording gets a bit repetertive sometimes also it's incredibly boring as nothing happens and when it does it's over in a pargraph or to so shorten the writing where nothings happaning and exstend the writing where thigs do finaly you fail to tell the readers all they need to know like they know stuff they haven't been told while your reading and it confuses you
WalkingStranger99 chapter 3 . 7/18/2012
man i love this story i tip my hat of to you my friend
Black Ace 0 chapter 1 . 5/27/2012
Adding to Faves.
puma1sunfire chapter 8 . 3/8/2012
Great story! Looking forward to reading what else you have written.
Agato - The Hadou Inari chapter 8 . 10/25/2011
You really should get back to this. Don't know what in the hell made you stop on it in the first place.
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