| Reviews for Loyalty (Old) |
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   AshEshyr chapter 48 . 3/23/2024 oh damn that is a ruuude place to stop and focus on the rewrite lmao |
| AshEshyr chapter 47 . 3/23/2024 I think, with 1 chapter left even though i suspcted it a few chapters ago, i have come to the realisation that this fic isn't actually finished despite it being marked as so. I hope the rewrite manages to cap the story off at least. I started reading this after becoming interested due to the rewrite so i'm not *too* broken up about the lack of a proper conclusion but its a bit fo a bummer. Hopefully the rewrite can catch up within a few years, even if thats pretty optmistic considering how spread out the chapters are. what *is* written is very good, and i appreciated the guts that came with certain twists, and how it recontextualised a lot of earlier things. I can tell the twists were thought out well in advance, but aren't the whole story which is a good thing. |
| kazuyaryo chapter 47 . 2/18/2024 I hope one day you can updatd that fantastic story ... |
| KanjiK chapter 16 . 12/14/2023 Did she just- invent manual Sharingan? |
| Axel Fones chapter 22 . 9/8/2023 What a fucking trip I was not expecting this whole turn of events. It’s cool as hell |
| tazzywazzyYOURbeloved chapter 20 . 7/31/2023 WHAT |
| tazzywazzyYOURbeloved chapter 16 . 7/31/2023 "a real fight" man says to girl who slaughtered a hundred men last week |
| tazzywazzyYOURbeloved chapter 16 . 7/31/2023 uh oh... |
| tazzywazzyYOURbeloved chapter 13 . 7/31/2023 AHHHHHHH WHY DID THEY CHOOSE THE NURSE |
| tazzywazzyYOURbeloved chapter 11 . 7/31/2023 HOLY SHIR THATS TRAGIC AND AWFUL BUT GO SAKURA OH MY GOD |
| tazzywazzyYOURbeloved chapter 7 . 7/31/2023 NO |
| tazzywazzyYOURbeloved chapter 6 . 7/31/2023 sakura manhandling hinata is so fucking funny |
| NamelessWanderer6 chapter 29 . 7/20/2023 WTF |
| NamelessWanderer6 chapter 15 . 7/19/2023 Interesting chapter. |
| Angie2002-01 chapter 26 . 6/20/2023 3 |