Reviews for Emily Windsnap and the Battle for her Life
KidoMichaelisKonno chapter 2 . 3/15
Well, to make this story better when you change perspective [talking about Mr Shelton] put a line break. Otherwise thas a good chapter.
KidoMichaelisKonno chapter 1 . 3/15
GREAT JOB! That was an awsome chapter for your very first story.:]
Guest chapter 1 . 7/12/2014
Very good
Kilmeny17 chapter 1 . 6/21/2014
You have a nice writing style, but this story doesn't make sense. Why would anyone trust a twelve-year-old, albeit a smart and capable one, to save her parents, especially when there are other, older, and responsible
Luna the HP fan chapter 6 . 4/20/2014
AWWWWWWWW! They SO deserve to be together! :)
Luna the HP fan chapter 4 . 4/20/2014
I want a trident that talks! :)
Luna the HP fan chapter 3 . 4/20/2014
Nice insight on the human world! :)
Luna the HP fan chapter 2 . 4/20/2014
Bit confusing as their were no difference between the perspectives. Still good though. :)
Luna the HP fan chapter 1 . 4/20/2014
Nice! Cool twist with the teachers being the villains! :)
scubagirl808 chapter 6 . 3/8/2013
So awesome!
Ember chapter 3 . 1/6/2013
Hm...very nice. Kinda repetitive word choice though... You should have her attacked by like, a shark or something.
Laura chapter 1 . 2/22/2011
That was just CREEPY and SAD! Sorry, i am forever the optimistic but no that won't work.

-Laura(Emily Windsnap, Percy Jackson, and Maximum Ride fanatic)

I love puppies!
18483628162729262 chapter 1 . 12/10/2010
This really actually good. is this really ur first fic? I'm writing my first too but I don't think its anywhere near as good as this is... LOL really good though
Emothgurl chapter 5 . 9/30/2009
i lied the flashback
Emothgurl chapter 6 . 9/29/2009
I LOVED THIS CHAPTER!OMG OMG OMG! but u could have better described The Kiss..BUT I LOVED IT! AUGH!
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