Reviews for When I Saw Him
Sarah Crawford chapter 2 . 6/25/2010
Very cute. And you’ve managed to write an OC that I like. I’m in awe. :) Great job. Going back and filling in some details would make this story even better. I’m not quite sure I understand how everyone lost their memory and who did it. This could easily become a longer short story with 10 or so chapters if you filled in the details of that. That is, if you wanted to go to all of that trouble of re-writing.
Cassandra30 chapter 2 . 11/20/2009
Hee hee Very cute.
Cassandra30 chapter 1 . 11/20/2009
Interesting beginning.