|Reviews for The Coffee Shop|
| Edward's spouse chapter 1 . 10/8/2011
| miranda04 chapter 1 . 4/30/2011
I liked it, until the end. There didn't seem like enough happened (especially on her end) for them to declare themselves in love with each other. Sure, they're attracted to one another, and maybe he does love her (we don't know his POV). But, the love thing seemed weak to me.
Well written otherwise, though. I'm off to check out your other pieces!
| Duchess Michelle chapter 1 . 3/23/2011
Short & sweet
I wish there was more build up, but I liked it. :)
| twilightmom1 chapter 1 . 1/26/2011
| feja chapter 1 . 12/17/2010
Sweet little story - with some heavy lovin' ;)
| VampChick76 chapter 1 . 11/27/2010
| OPOSOJOJ chapter 1 . 11/25/2010
So good, but wayyyyyyyyyy too short.
| Analitica chapter 1 . 7/26/2010
i loved it!
| LilIzzy chapter 1 . 6/26/2010
| tiffyboocullenjonas chapter 1 . 6/8/2010
wow that was great loved it I hope there is more to come
| Bammers chapter 1 . 6/8/2010
wow that was good thanks for sharing...
| emovampyreseer chapter 1 . 5/29/2010
| Flynnstonesss chapter 1 . 4/23/2010
great lemon. Hope you will expand it from a one shot to a story. It would be really great and i would be more than happy to beta it :)
| romeosjuliet14 chapter 1 . 2/14/2010
Great job on this one shot.
| Angel chapter 1 . 2/14/2010
that's sweet, Dom Eddie huh. but he love her.