Reviews for Honour Amongst Snakes
Savannah Rivers chapter 1 . 11/14/2009
Lexxxx chapter 30 . 11/14/2009
love love love love! Wonderful job! I love that Narcissa is no longer a death eater(:
Macabre-Melody chapter 29 . 11/9/2009
a nice insight into lucius' struggle between duty and love here, i think, good update :)
Fragorl chapter 29 . 11/7/2009
this was really brilliant! I actually find myself liking poor old Abraxus and Lucius is as ever sympathetically written - I would like to know how narcissa feels about the conflict between serving the dark lord and having a child though - cos before you mentioned her having as much of a stake in the pure blood cause as he does and she doesnt seem the kinda girl to drop everything she cares about just cos she becomes a mother! xx
Lexxxx chapter 29 . 11/6/2009
wow really really powerful! I enjoyed it
Macabre-Melody chapter 28 . 11/2/2009
bless you for the update! P i love the Howler bit! and

“What happened to the other six weeks?” Lucius asked stupidly.


“You, there. What the hell is an ice chip and where can I find one?”

but there's just something extremely nit-picky i noticed:

"flinging his cloak at the poor House Elf as he scurries to greet his master"

The word "scurries" is in a different tense from the rest of the sentence; shouldn't it be "scurried"? like i said, it's just nit-picky, nothing to worry much about :)
Moonlit Lightning chapter 1 . 11/1/2009
Okay, first thing, this is GREAT, even at just the first chapter. I loved how you talked about Lucius and Bellatrix's relationship- and that Lucius immediately thought of her when Abraxas mentioned the Blacks. On that note, I was also pleased that you used Lucius' dad's canon name. Plus, you did a great job of keeping the Malfoys in character; even when they were arguing, the dialogue was very formal and proper- befitting of upper-class purebloods.

There are a few things you could work on, though. Firstly, continuity within the series; unless you're operating in an AU, Andromeda is younger than Bellatrix. Other than that, there were a few small grammar errors I noticed- comma placement and capitalization were two- but the story was wonderfully free of glaring mistakes.

On that note, I would like to refer you to a creative roleplaying site called Rocky Mountain International (rmimagic .com). It's a great place to work on writing and have a lot of fun in the HP sort-of-universe too. You should definitely take a look. :-)
Fragorl chapter 28 . 11/1/2009
this was amazing! I loved the part of back story with lucius' parents and the scene with him recieving the owls instructing him to come home was priceless - ow must u stop? Im enjoying it so much! xx
skele-gro chapter 28 . 10/31/2009
Haha, I love Lucius in this chapter! It's amazing to see him so 'human' (not that he wasn't before). Can't wait for the next update!
Lexxxx chapter 28 . 10/31/2009
I would love love love for this story to go on forever but it does have to have an end point and I think Voldemort's fall would be perfect. My favorite line was- “You, there. What the hell is an ice chip and where can I find one?”
Aeraqua chapter 28 . 10/31/2009
Wow...this chapter really is awesome. It would've been funny though, if Narcissa started swearing at Lucius, because usually hormonic wives do that...;).
Serpent91 chapter 27 . 10/26/2009
Macabre-Melody chapter 27 . 10/25/2009
"Daddies welcome." LOL

and "

He did not realise what a Gryffindor thought this was." nice ending.

i shouldn't really say i love you, because i don't know you, but i really appreciate how you get these wonderful chapters up so fast, when you're under pressure from other sources too! So, i suppose it's ok to say that i love the fact that you get chapters up so quickly...? or something! :) chapter 2 . 10/22/2009
will review props in bit, dont have time atm
Macabre-Melody chapter 26 . 10/22/2009
i'm relieved about the outcome of this chapter - thank you for posting it!
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