Reviews for Sharing Sleep |
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![]() ![]() You are probably getting annoyed at all my reviews...but i take back my rudeness. THis is fine. |
![]() ![]() At this point it is so unrealistic. This could never have happened in the 7th book. But, I appreciate it nevertheless. I still like it. |
![]() ![]() Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm Value declining, but still best fanfic I've ever read! Great job! |
![]() ![]() I feel like your Ron is too much like Harry's personality, but I mean, this is GOOD. I usually hate fanfiction, but this is really good. Great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sweet and awkward! Thats Romione for ya. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ron falling asleep on her stomach? And then looking at her face from that angle...hmm...wouldn't something be obstructing his view? (She IS 13, and going through puberty) I think he would have felt awkward when he realises that...Nevertheless, Great chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww! I always thought that Hermione is a really caring person...but she just doesn't show it that much in the books until much later |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Just reread this for the first time in years, and wow it's so good! I really loved it! The characters feel real, and I love all the little scenes you added in. Super well written and fun! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lovely! A very sweet idea, cleverly written, and with excellent characterisations - all in all, a great read. Highly recommended for fellow Romione fans |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can’t help leaving another message here. Just wanna let you know, I love reading the part when Ron acknowledged that love was in the air, and i was heartbroken at the mention that a year before he thought he had to love her in his dreams (and I love going heartbroken by that). And the final paragraph! “Take me, I’m all yours.” my whole being melted! I can’t even describe what I’m feeling. Still feeling awed and speechless as i stare at the words! I may as well steal the words and say the same to your Ron... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Something drew me back to this chapter again...i know, it was that line, “We... we’ll go someplace nice. I... I’ll take you.” I missed the feeling of this moving line gave me when i first read it. So I read this incredibly beautiful scene again for another two times in a row. Your beautiful words kept giving me wonders. For exampleSomething had ripped open his heart, not in a painful way, but just enough so he could let go. He had felt it before, but now it was a gaping wound never to be closed... unless she told him to.” Best graphic description ever of the state of his heart! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Brilliant. Absolutely brilliant! I can't express how much I love this story...all the chapters! Especially the final battle part 1. Thats exactly how Ron would tell her about the locket. Right to the point. And you have soothed all the necessary components that lead up to their first kiss. Not that it didn't make sense in the books per se, but the brain work in Hermione was so sufficient until now we have your work. I never entirely understood, passionate she would be to house elves, she wouldn't just decide to kiss Ron for that. I read other versions here that's addressing this which are very beautiful too, but yours will be canon for me from now on. You have no idea how emotional I was when reading this. Thank you so much. You mentioned one more chapter to go? Please complete it! Please! |
![]() ![]() I swearI have read every single fanfiction on internet about Ron's return, and i swear this one is the best. Period. |