|Reviews for Blue Sub No 6: The Year After, Part 2|
| Jazzman chapter 4 . 4/12/2010
It's a good story, nice development of emotions. However, you're giving a little too many hints of why Deep Sea Six was built. Also, to put it frankly, your spelling is terrible. Absolutely Horrendous. Read you stories before you write them, so to say.
Enjoy the constructive critisism.