|Reviews for Make Up|
| smokingace chapter 1 . 3/10/2010
"I felt weird and so does this. I took advantade of Tiedoll's fatherly adoration to make him a bit of a mindless servant-like lovesick pedophile. Yay!"
... it's still so beautiful, all the same. very powerful.
| azab chapter 1 . 9/12/2009
i loved it
| tessameh chapter 1 . 8/20/2009
Aw, you should give youself some credit at least.
I liked it, it was original.