Reviews for Make Up
smokingace chapter 1 . 3/10/2010
"I felt weird and so does this. I took advantade of Tiedoll's fatherly adoration to make him a bit of a mindless servant-like lovesick pedophile. Yay!"

... it's still so beautiful, all the same. very powerful.
azab chapter 1 . 9/12/2009
i loved it
tessameh chapter 1 . 8/20/2009
Aw, you should give youself some credit at least.

I liked it, it was original.