|Reviews for The Raven|
| Guest chapter 21 . 6/17
Seems like Akira has a mystery on her hands. Update soon!
| Devil Counting Tear Drops chapter 21 . 6/17
Wonderfully well written, characters stay in character and your OC is believable as well as matures as the story progresses. Cannot wait for the next update
| Viviene001 chapter 21 . 3/6
PLS update soon!:D
| Guest chapter 14 . 3/5
I thought -kun was for boys, -chan for girls.
But I really love it! So in character and hilarious
| Guest chapter 3 . 3/5
Heehee. So exciting! How did Akira know Hibari's name though? And shouldn't she at least have faster reflexes due to tennis and stronger muscle and agility and stuff? And wouldn't she have worried about protecting her arms and legs so she could keep playing?
Anyways, a great story!
| Nikks chapter 21 . 8/20/2014
Omg i hope you update. i am loving this story so hard! I love hibari fluff and you made me cry when he got sick lol hope to see an update soon you rock!
| Brightcloud0915 chapter 21 . 7/9/2014
| shika93 chapter 3 . 7/4/2014
| shika93 chapter 2 . 7/4/2014
| shika93 chapter 1 . 7/4/2014
Ha, interesting beginning.
| I Know I'm A Dreamer chapter 21 . 6/28/2014
Well that's kind of weird . . . why shouldn't a girl be able to spend time with her sibling?
| Regia Puella chapter 20 . 6/26/2014
Oooh Akira-chan is finally showing her 'inner hitman.' Wahaha! I really appreciate how in character everyone seems to be! Probably my favorite part of this story is the relationship Akira has with her cousin, and Hayato and Tsuna. It's really cute how close Takeshi and Akira are, and how the others have come to truly care for her I also like the friendship between Kusakabe and Akira! (Of course, the Kyoya-Akira thing is spot on, A, so that's only to be expected that I enjoy it.) I'm looking forward to seeing what happens in the future!
| PondRiverWilliams chapter 20 . 6/25/2014
The time has come for badass Akria to emerg.
| exaigon chapter 7 . 6/25/2014
I want to give you a small correction for this chapter. You said honorifics at the end of a name makes them more intimate. It is in fact the other way around. San is a polite honorific used for everyone unless they are a friend (then you can use chan and kun). No honorific either means you're being very rude or you're very close with them, maybe even intimately.
| EVA-Saiyajin chapter 20 . 6/25/2014
The resemblance to Yamamoto kind of disappears after one or two chapters. After that, Akira largely goes from an interesting weird character to pretty much how 90% of other female OCs in fanfiction: average, uninteresting, normal, prone to crying, and detached from the anime-absurdity.