Reviews for The Son of The Ancient One
Guest chapter 2 . 1/14
Glad to hear about the family of Naruto,...still thinking about kyuubi ...sometimos I feel that something is inside you...l just need to Hug it
Curse Of Kings chapter 1 . 8/26/2020
Who is Magnus? The only Magnus I know is from Warhammer 40K.
Seimika chapter 53 . 12/28/2019
Still it's a shame how this story ended
Seimika chapter 21 . 12/26/2019
It's too bad this is dead it was interesting to read
Deathtoll1000 chapter 1 . 11/16/2019
great story and plot loved it so much can't wait for the next chapter
AcidESP chapter 53 . 10/13/2019
Good story, I hope it continues, greetings, see you, bye!
Monster King chapter 53 . 4/9/2019
Great job
Guest chapter 53 . 5/18/2018
You started off real good at the start of this story but you pulled to much cross over on it and it just went down hill from there i like the conservative of were you where going but needs a lot of rewrite to make it a lot better but still it was a some what good story keep trying
Taiki no Hitsuzen Kage chapter 8 . 3/15/2018
Grammar is off, words are missing, just absolutely terrible in this chapter. Unrealistic dialogue, past-tense, future-tense, and present-tense is all off. In general, you need a beta or a program like Grammarly and the like for your writings. Because it doesn't seem edited, and the punctuations are all off in the dialogue, when children can fix their dialogue by going on Brain-Pop and looking at Dialogue.
Taiki no Hitsuzen Kage chapter 6 . 3/15/2018
I feel like the logic holes are glaringly obvious in this chapter. Mizuki got away with calling students brutes. attempting to attack with deadly force, and in general being a bad teacher.
Section Leader 1-1 chapter 34 . 6/26/2016
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Findarato chapter 3 . 4/24/2015
Are you still alive? If so are you going to ever update your stories?
Doctor Psychosis chapter 9 . 10/4/2014
so wait we got a blond alucard, a kratos with hair, who is hinata based on?! this is gonna drive me sane!
Seimika chapter 9 . 1/23/2014
you guys need to find a beta with good english skills lol i've noticed alot of bad grammar in your writing and had to fix words and sentences in my head while rereading your story lol.. the story is still good i just forgot that about having to do that
fan chapter 33 . 1/7/2014
Yah i love soul eater and the way u put them in the story
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