Reviews for Pinks and The General
tamwhit chapter 17 . 7/13/2017
Please update your story soon
peace-out-girl chapter 17 . 10/14/2014
i love it update soon please. i think they should both cancel it together and say their dating
ViciousNightGoddess chapter 17 . 4/27/2014
Holy shit I have been dying waiting for this to be updateed I checked everyday I was so so so sos so desperate that it sad I mean OMG OMG I hope this is not a dream because this jsut made my day my week I mean damn and it was so freaking good that I want to reread it again and again
Lux'.'Nox.512 chapter 17 . 4/27/2014
vampirelove20 chapter 17 . 4/27/2014
Go jasper and bella! I hope jasper can protect her and she needs to let someone take care of her!
heather.schutt chapter 16 . 3/24/2013
Please update soon, love were the story is going but needs to be contiuned.
TrueSkye chapter 16 . 12/12/2012
I am so beyond hooked on this story.

Totally different from all others I've read.

Love it.
TrueSkye chapter 15 . 12/12/2012
What a man to wake up to... **sigh** AND the mirored ceiling; mmmm, kinky-sexy...twice the Jasper! Who would complain? LOL

"...because she's my Esme," aww, I LOVE that!
LittleJ36 chapter 16 . 12/9/2012
Love this story! please update soon
k chapter 16 . 9/29/2012
i loved it please update... This is so original! its awesome
2muchrubbish chapter 1 . 9/15/2012
Great idea for a story and your first chapter has me hooked!
fanicki chapter 16 . 9/4/2012
really enjoying this story. Please update as soon as you can. can't wait to see what happens.
k chapter 15 . 8/30/2012
Hey, keep up the good work i love it!
Awsome idea, so original.
wendy1969 chapter 16 . 9/1/2012
so far all i can say is WOW!
NatalieLynn chapter 16 . 9/1/2012
Really good chapter!
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