|Reviews for Iria chapters 7&8 (Airess style!!!)|
| Halomek chapter 1 . 4/19/2006
It has potential, but it needs a lot of work - such as fleshing it out to more than just simple dialogue.
| Mizu Miyamoto chapter 1 . 3/13/2006
aw man, is this the only chapter? i want to see more. this story has potential
| golden-eyedwolf842 chapter 1 . 12/29/2005
Wow, very nice fic! You did a very nice job of writing this fic! :P
| Kippo chapter 1 . 10/25/2004
Wow! That's some good stuff! I like the story line, it's real solid. I detect some tweking is neede though, like instead of using such a straight-forward way of writing try to flow a little bit. Other than that...*grasps to your shirt* FINISH IT! PWEEZE?
| Artistlil349 chapter 1 . 5/20/2004
The only critique I have of this so fair is that Kei really was a girl pretending to be a boy and denied being a girl even when Fujikiro confronted her.
| James Birdsong chapter 1 . 1/24/2003
| piccoloslove chapter 1 . 11/27/2002
haha, great story, please continue cant wait to see more, and oh it needs more Fujikuro! *winks* BYEZ FOR NOW!
| sweetjex chapter 1 . 3/22/2002
very good! I loved it! . MORE MORE MORE!