|Reviews for Retrospect|
| Iseki chapter 1 . 9/3/2009
This is so many things. mostly truth.
I really enjoy the sharp contrast of character during their face off. It is perfectly said and I can read it again and again taking pleasure in its truth and its bittersweetness. It writes of good and great moments through its ferocity.
(I always flounder with my words trying to review something that speaks to me.)
| JingYee chapter 1 . 8/25/2009
wait, no. D: I need more!
| NinjaSheik chapter 1 . 8/21/2009
| serenbach chapter 1 . 8/21/2009
I really enjoyed these, in just three short paragraphs, a whole long story is told. I like how you focus on their differences in the second one and the last few lines are just heart-breaking. Where have all your happy Yuffentines gone? Lol, just kidding. This was great! :)
| kleptomaniac chapter 1 . 8/20/2009
that was beautiful. ;_;
| LM22102 chapter 1 . 8/20/2009
Mm .. can't really get a good feel of it. So I can't say what to critique, really. I'll have to wait for a few more chapters to get the flow.
Don't know if this chapter has three individual, non-related shorts. Or this chapter is a short in itself, which I'm going to assume it is as you can correlate all three together if I'd like, and I am.
Pity the ending, who knows how tragic their love has been, and will be once now she is unreachable.