|Reviews for A One|
| Schmitt chapter 1 . 6/4/2012
Gosh, what a sad drabble ...
Thank you for this anyway :)
| talking-hat chapter 1 . 1/7/2011
This is wonderfully written. I captured his character just right. I especially loved the last lines:
'Six bullets hit him all at once. One in his arm. One in his gut. One in his head. Three in his heart.'
That was heartbreaking. :'(
Keep up the good work!
| CaptainKrueger chapter 1 . 2/6/2010
I love Salim because he's so misunderstoon. Poor Salim.
| Marnomy chapter 1 . 1/26/2010
This was very great. [: Simply wonderful. I think you captured Salim wonderfully.
| VanillaFieldsOfGold chapter 1 . 1/18/2010
I love how you portrayed Salim in this chappie! Salim is my favorite character in the movie because he's always so misunderstood; he did everything for his brother and, as the movie ended, I wondered at what were his last thoughts as he sat in the bathtub, awaiting his fate. I almost CRIED when he died...sniffle sniffle :,C
Anyways, wonderful characterization and I do hope you'll write more about Salim!
| HoistTheColours chapter 1 . 11/16/2009
Aw, very sad, but cute. Good job. (:
| Ningen Demonai chapter 1 . 8/30/2009
Oh, ouch. The story was well-written and ended very neatly, with a nice punch to the reader's heart. Very well done.
| Thenidiel chapter 1 . 8/21/2009
Nice story - very well written. Thanks for posting!