Reviews for A Rough Start
fantasticme chapter 7 . 5/12/2014
I really want to know more about edward's past
fantasticme chapter 6 . 5/12/2014
loved this chapter...
fantasticme chapter 5 . 5/12/2014
going great...
fantasticme chapter 4 . 5/12/2014
that will be interesting...
fantasticme chapter 3 . 5/12/2014
can't wait for edward and bella's meeting or have they already met
fantasticme chapter 2 . 5/12/2014
anthony is so sweet...
fantasticme chapter 1 . 5/12/2014
interesting plot...
R4Ever chapter 41 . 5/10/2014
EXCELLENT!
Guest chapter 31 . 5/8/2014
Edward likes to make things about himself.
Guest chapter 26 . 4/28/2014
Edward makes a lot of stuff about him when it should all be focused on Anthony.
Guest chapter 25 . 4/28/2014
I don't like how Edward ignores the just making it worse.
Guest chapter 24 . 4/28/2014
I don't understand why Bella can't just say what she wants to say. Instead she comes up with all this crap or crying and Edward is suppose to magically know what she means or what she's talking about. She twists and turns and nothing she says comes out right. It's really frustrating.
SundaySolis chapter 41 . 4/27/2014
Awww favorite story ever
Mia Nymph chapter 8 . 4/23/2014
Oh, wow! I knew that Law office was gonna come up
Mia Nymph chapter 5 . 4/23/2014
I love this! That last part was so funny!
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