Reviews for A Rough Start
anamart05 chapter 8 . 3/5/2015
Parece q Bella al final si se esta involucrando... Pero lo tiene dificil Edward y se nota que no es pq el quiere sino pq de momento no da para mas
anamart05 chapter 6 . 3/5/2015
Que gran ayuda le ha dado bella...seguro que asifuncionan mejor Edward y Anthony
anamart05 chapter 5 . 3/4/2015
Jajaja
anamart05 chapter 4 . 3/4/2015
Uffff
anamart05 chapter 3 . 3/4/2015
Ohhhhh que mal va todo
anamart05 chapter 2 . 3/4/2015
Uff parece q bella se ha enfadado...
Pobre Anthony, me da mucha pena...
anamart05 chapter 1 . 3/4/2015
Uff que mal empieza la cosa para Edward...
Me encanta q sea una historia donde Edward no tenga dinero y sea una persona normal y corriente. Con un trabajo duro y en peligro, una casa no en muy buenas condiciones ... Es refrescante que tenga q trabajar para subsistir...
Guest chapter 41 . 2/18/2015
So good. Words can't even describe!
Carolina. Cullen.Swan chapter 41 . 2/17/2015
I really love this fic. It's one of my favorites.:)
cctwilight chapter 41 . 2/12/2015
This is one of my favorite stories! I just had to read it again!
jterry453 chapter 41 . 1/25/2015
Loved this, it took me a while to finish from the last time i started reading it, but i loved it all the same. Thanks for sharing
FanficButterfly chapter 35 . 1/18/2015
Awww. I really admire that you've made your characters so down to earth. They have a very deep complexity about them.
FanficButterfly chapter 18 . 1/18/2015
Sorry that I don't do a very good job of reviewing but I think your story is very well written and interesting. I like that you didn't make Jessica a bad neglectful mother, it makes the story more down to earth in a way. One thing that I am curious about is Jessica's father, who was mentioned to be in a wheelchair. I understand that there might be issues with that but it would seem kinda natural that Anthony would want to see him again or talk to him on the phone every now and then.
lulu52 chapter 41 . 12/18/2014
Awesome!
xoxocullenluverxoxo chapter 41 . 12/10/2014
Oh my gosh I absolutely loved this story! Seriously your emotions in this are amazing, I couldn't stop reading, this was well written and we'll thought and was an awesome read! I like how your plot was so thick, it wasn't just all about the lemons, and watching Anthony and Edward develop into a team was awesome to watch. I really loved this story!
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