Reviews for A Rough Start |
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![]() ![]() This story is really boring to me for some reason. Can’t really put my finger on it besides slow development and unnecessary misunderstandings. This is where I stop reading |
![]() ![]() ![]() Outstanding story |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed this story. You did a great job! Can’t wait to read more of your stuff |
![]() ![]() ![]() I truly enjoyed this unexpected and wonderful story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just read this one again from start to finish! This was as great or maybe even better the second time around! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am so, so happy that Edward is finally "manning up!" I am enjoying this story. At first, I wasn't sure that I was going to get intonit, but Edward is becoming the good man and father that he should be! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Laughed and cried all over again. This is a great well written story of a family struck by tragedy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OH MY GOD THE ANTICIPATION IM DYING |
![]() ![]() ![]() shit man this is the smartest and the cutest proposal i've read so far, the cheesiest too that i just kept shouting AWWWW |
![]() ![]() ![]() Finished this story last night and I’m still processing. Wow! I loved it so much! I also really liked that you wrote ambiguously at times and left it up to us to decide what to think. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! Thank you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() awww . 3 Mommy |
![]() ![]() ![]() Man your goodddd . even Im scared! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Salvation Army ! lol |