|Reviews for A Rough Start|
| madelyn16 chapter 4 . 9/2/2009
This is such a great story. :) Sad, but good. I'm seeing some very good cuteness potential. :)
Btw, I LOVED The Tutor, and I'm sure this story will be fantastic as well. I'm so excited to see it get updated!
| theorange3 chapter 3 . 9/2/2009
| Ellie-BR chapter 4 . 9/2/2009
I loved The Tutor...and this new one is great as well. Can't wait to read more ;)
| Lyxa chapter 4 . 9/2/2009
as usual, great chaps :D
man, it would suck be bella though.
| edwardsothalova chapter 4 . 9/1/2009
Oh man... this story is so dang good! Great chapter bb!
| Jamieson Zed chapter 4 . 9/1/2009
I'm loving this story more and more with each chapter. You're really getting into those nitty-gritty details, and that's fantastic. Looking forward to reading more!
| sherylb chapter 4 . 9/1/2009
This is just so sad right now...
| sherylb chapter 3 . 9/1/2009
Oh, my heart is just breaking for both Edward and Anthony here.
| sherylb chapter 2 . 9/1/2009
It's easy to be angry with Edward right now...I think he is probably clueless more than cruel...At least I hope that is the case...
| jacmom chapter 2 . 9/1/2009
Wow! Edward has know clue when it comes to fatherhood...
| jacmom chapter 1 . 9/1/2009
Loved this chapter! Like Edward and the guy's job, it's different...not ff I've read so far has that as a profession...looking forward to reading on and seeing what happens next!
| rlwoods chapter 4 . 9/1/2009
Bella's going to meet Edward at the party! Heehee, she doesn't know what she's getting herself into!
| kellybear3 chapter 4 . 9/1/2009
So cool that Bella is going to be at Anthony's party. This story is really making me sad. I feel so sorry for Edward, but I feel especially sorry for Anthony. This is a very delicate subject you're writing about. I hope you allow Edward to start caring for his son, atleast a litte bit.
| Vega80 chapter 4 . 9/1/2009
Oh yay! I can't to see what happens at the BBQ.
| Vega80 chapter 3 . 9/1/2009
Oh my God! Edward is a raging douche bag! And a deadbeat dad. How sad!