| Reviews for A Rough Start |
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   midnite serenade chapter 1 . 8/21/2009 I was so excited to get a new story from you Megan! What a way to end a chapter. This should be an interesting take on E. I can't think of any other story w/ adult E (that I've read anyway) where he is not college educated. I look forward to seeing the development and growth of his character. Are you still planning on doing the two stories you mentioned on the forum? Rondell (elizabeth masen) |
| Famingo chapter 2 . 8/21/2009 Why do I have the feeling that little Miss Methodical is in for a rude awakening with one Mr. Edward Cullen? I really like seeing Mama Bear Bella and it seems like she is going to come out to play because Anthony is such a sweet kid and she's seeing all the things that are going wrong now that he's living with his dad. I can't wait for sparks to fly when she actually gets him in her classroom. |
| TearsInTheDust chapter 2 . 8/21/2009 Poor Anthony! :( With a father like Edward...honestly...men are so stupid! I mean they were children come they don't know how to feed a poor 5 years old kid? You know... I have seen many times this Edwardian behavior! |
| ObseleteAccount chapter 2 . 8/21/2009 loved the chapter does Bella have OCD or something? God Edward must be struggling at home or else is being an ass either way can't wait until next chapter |
| SoundsLikeAPersonalProblem chapter 2 . 8/21/2009 this will make an awesome story updates soon |
| LibraryLady08 chapter 2 . 8/21/2009 Bella's POV was very interesting. Conflict coming up next? Looking forward to more. :) -MJ |
| 21Snapdragons chapter 2 . 8/21/2009 oh, this is going to be interesting...Bella's going to put Edward in his place I can see it now! Great start for this story I can't wait to read more! |
| Ebhid chapter 2 . 8/21/2009 Interesting idea. I am looking forward to following this story. |
| TwiDi chapter 2 . 8/21/2009 I'm loving this story... I just found it and i was hooked :) Please update soon, I can't wait to see what happens next :) Cheers! |
| kenziemorton chapter 2 . 8/21/2009 i love it and want more of it!lol. how often will you update? |
| Edward the Dark Angel chapter 2 . 8/21/2009 Bella sounds a little OCD with her two alarm clocks and labeling of the desks, etc., but it's an interesting trait. Clearly Edward is ill equipped to be a dad. I'm sure Bella's going to set him straight and I can't wait to read that. |
| buriedalive55 chapter 2 . 8/21/2009 I like Bella so far, but she is definitely not a character I can relate to. Anthony is adorable. He makes me so sad! Edward is so clueless and I'm starting to think that avoidance is major character trait of his. In the first chapter, I thought that blowing off the social services calls was not his normal behavior, but a one time thing. But seeing how he just ignores the school timings and treats Anthony, I'm starting to see his immaturity more. All this makes me look forward to seeing more of Edward and Anthony's interactions. Thanks for the quick update! |
| lou5858 chapter 1 . 8/21/2009 Nice plot! D Cant wait for the update! |
| thewasofshall chapter 2 . 8/21/2009 My only complaint with this chapter is that it's so short (or maybe that's just because I'm desperately bored with no updates and am spoiled so soon with one from this story? probably). I can't wait to see how you progress with the plot and characterization. It's really interesting to see so many dynamics within a short time frame (Bella's perfectionism, Edward needing to take care of his son, his problems at work...). |
| Emily M. Whitlock chapter 2 . 8/21/2009 *grinning* i can't wait to read the letter she's sending him :D Thank's for the speedy update by the way ;) |