| Reviews for A Rough Start |
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   coldplaywhore chapter 1 . 8/21/2009 So I've totally loved the Tutor and now I must admit, you have me very intrigued with this one :) Looking forward to reading more. |
| americnxidiot chapter 1 . 8/21/2009 I'm very excited for this one :) |
| Rareangel chapter 1 . 8/21/2009 Great start! Can't wait for the next chapter. |
| Famingo chapter 1 . 8/21/2009 Poor Edward. What first words to hear from your son. I'm sure this was a shock for everyone involved, but I have to wonder if Jessica mentioned Edward to Anthony or if she mentioned all the time what an ass he was. Hopefully he wasn't mentioned and he can overcome the abandonment issues a bit better than having to disprove to his son his dead mother's opinions. Looking forward to seeing how this progresses. |
| barbarito chapter 1 . 8/21/2009 Oh My! Looks like you have me hooked! Loving this so far.! |
| kenziemorton chapter 1 . 8/21/2009 i love it and can't wait to read more |
| cod46 chapter 1 . 8/21/2009 Loved it. Really a rogh start for both of them. Edward seems a responsible person beyond his dismissive way about certain things. It will be thrilling to see how the relationship evolves after beginning with an I hate you. Sweet little Anthony. Tough situation, losing his whole world suddenly. Please, keep going. Thank you for writing and sharing it with us. |
| iamawickedchild chapter 1 . 8/21/2009 HA! omg that ending! LOL! so funny! poor Edward has no idea what the hell to do! :D I alredy love this! Cant wait for him to meet Bella! :D |
| twifanficfreak chapter 1 . 8/21/2009 Loved the first chapter! Can't wait to read more! |
| teacher1209 chapter 1 . 8/21/2009 Oh I think I a going to like this story. Edward is not rich, no college degree and stuck in a dead-end job, not something you see very often in fics. Love that the first words out of Anthony's mouth are 'I hate you.' Yep, they are going to get along so well! LOL! |
| Sunfeathers chapter 1 . 8/21/2009 Oh this is gonna be god, Megan! What an interesting and unique premise! Can't wait to meet Bella and find out if there are any ladies in Edward's life now. Anthony is a kick - I hate you, he says! Lol. I wonder what Jess told him about his father? Can't wait for more! |
| berdb chapter 1 . 8/21/2009 Uh Oh ! I guess Jessica was not kind in her description of "daddy" Story is good so far. Kind of unique, an Edward that is not rich or "all together". |
| bexi21 chapter 1 . 8/21/2009 This is definitely different than any other AH Twilight fic I've read (and I mean that in a good way!) The plot is very compelling so far and what a way to end the first chapter! I can't wait to read more :) |
| larin20 chapter 1 . 8/21/2009 So far this first chapter really caught my interest and i really want to know how Edward is going to be as a father. It's awkward but endearing at the same time when Edward mentally compares Anthony's features to his own and his parents. He's feeling that connection already even if he doesn't know it yet. I love The Tutor and I'm sure to love A Rough Start too! Can't wait! |
| ObseleteAccount chapter 1 . 8/21/2009 i love it great work continue please, update soon |