Reviews for A Rough Start
Nannyjojo chapter 33 . 11/1/2013
Hehe, yeah I had picked up on it way before Bella.
That was quite romantic for Edward.
Loved it.
Nannyjojo chapter 32 . 11/1/2013
Well the both seem to be on the same page.
Looks like he and Esme are making progress, little by little.
Nannyjojo chapter 31 . 11/1/2013
Leave it to them, to blow up at each other to get it off their chests.
They really do need to open up to each other more. lol.
Loving it and looking forward to more
maggiegurle chapter 41 . 10/31/2013
Loved your story! Thank U! :o)
forev3rsilenc3d chapter 41 . 10/31/2013
This was just so beautifully written! I truly enjoyed this story! I literally laughed, cried, and became angry at certain points because your writing was just that, enticing! This story was just so natural that one could mentally picture every moment! This has become one of my favorite Edward and Bella fanfics! I honestly can't wait to read what else you may have in store with other stories!
Nannyjojo chapter 30 . 10/31/2013
They seem to take a step forward and back at times.
The trip seemed to go well.
Looking forward to more
Nannyjojo chapter 29 . 10/31/2013
Go Rose.
Loved that Edward rang Vicki's employer. lol
Nannyjojo chapter 28 . 10/31/2013
I wondered if he would pick up on that.
She did state 'parent's conviction'
So looking forward to more
Nannyjojo chapter 27 . 10/31/2013
I really want to hug Edward.
He really has been thrown in at the deep end, but he seems to be doing really well.
Nannyjojo chapter 26 . 10/31/2013
I think Edward may still need counselling too.
He is so scared that someone is going to tell him he is a bad parent. How Ironic.
Nannyjojo chapter 25 . 10/31/2013
Oh little Anthony.
I do think that Bella is more invested in Anthony, but the other teacher needs to take a look at and realise he was like it cause of the subject.
I am sure they will get it sorted.
Nannyjojo chapter 24 . 10/31/2013
Yeah Bella has planted the seed.
They made it through their first fight.
I forgot to say in the last chapter, but I really want to snack Renee.
Nannyjojo chapter 23 . 10/31/2013
I feel for Edward even more now, carrying that guilt for something that was not even his in control.
They say there are always two sides.
Wow.
Nannyjojo chapter 22 . 10/31/2013
Oh!
Wonder if Charlie does know the story of Edward?
That was an interesting way to meet the parents.
Nannyjojo chapter 21 . 10/31/2013
Wow.
I knew something 'big' had happened but that blew me away.
So Carlisle still blames Edward.
Wonder if Jimmy ever come clean, or if he ever will.
No wonder he shuts himself off, he has carried that guilt since he was 12.
Glad he has Bella right now.
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