| Reviews for A Rough Start |
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  Guest chapter 27 . 6/16/2017 Edward is so closed off it pisses me off. Just communicate, damn you! Bella is a saint for putting up with this... |
 Zveka chapter 41 . 6/18/2017 rec'd by bevey99 :) on RobAttack on comments steam excellent story, thank you for sharing your words :) |
| Guest chapter 21 . 6/15/2017 My God, so so tragic. Fuck the parents, why would you leave KIDS unsupervised with guns with other kids around. What happened was an awful awful tragedy, I truly feel for Edward. What I don't understand is Esme and his father. You know your child intrinsically, how could you even contemplate him doing that purposely? If anything, they should be to blame |
| Guest chapter 10 . 6/15/2017 Hmm Edward's a little bit of an asshole here. Bella honestly is very lovely, has done so many favours for him already but has not betrayed any interest in him whatsoever. Him getting a little agitated about a date is fine...but it pricked me the wrong way a little. Also, in reality, if I was Bella there's no way I'd say yes - Edward needs to cultivate a relationship with a son first without creating any awkwardness (imagine them breaking up in the school year..eek!) |
| Guest chapter 8 . 6/15/2017 Bella has a heart of GOLD. Bless her. |
| orchidluv chapter 41 . 5/6/2017 This was such a real story! The trials, tribulations, emotions, thoughts of each and every event in their lives! I couldn't put this down! My only complaint is you introduce Jasper as Hale, later you say "Brandon/Whitlock house" then at the end, Bodie is named Hale. It's confusing because Rosalie is also Hale, yet there's no mention of a sibling relationship between JR. I love love loved it so dang much! |
| Guest chapter 41 . 5/2/2017 must be the 4th time I've read this story. thank u. |
| Fanslashtic chapter 41 . 5/3/2017 Jesus, this story seriously deprived me of some well needed sleep! And as we all know there's nothing better than a story you can't stop reading, even if it means you'll only get 3 hours of sleep before work! I was sad that it had to end. You did a great job and it was amazingly written! |
| ppeaches chapter 1 . 4/29/2017 Re-reading this never gets old. One of my favourites! |
| debba8 chapter 40 . 4/20/2017 I am trying to find the words. This was such a beautiful story. You know the saying "Love conquers all"? I think that was the theme for this story. I know this was written a long time ago. I just found it and was home sick from work and read it all the way through today. |
| Bevey99 chapter 41 . 4/14/2017 So good. And, this chapter was so sweet. Loved the story, thanks for writing. |
| Bevey99 chapter 25 . 4/11/2017 Excuse me but how can you fish in November in Forks Washington. It's really bloody cold. Fish hibernate. |
| Bevey99 chapter 14 . 4/9/2017 This white vehicle keeps showing up everywhere |
| Bevey99 chapter 22 . 4/10/2017 I love this story and have been reading as fast as I can and still work. But this chapter had so many errors it was distracting. |
| Kelly457 chapter 41 . 3/30/2017 I don't know how many times I've read this story now, but it still makes me laugh, cry and everything in between! Thank you. |