Reviews for A Rough Start |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Aïe ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() J’ai votre histoire dans mes favoris, je crois mais je n’ai jamais eu la chance de lire votre histoire. Le début est autour de la date de la naissance de ma petite-fille, je suppose que j’ai dû oublier que j’avais vu cette histoire. Quelle perte pour moi…. Vaut mieux tard que jamais! Lu avec Google Translate. French. Montréal, Québec. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! Thanks for sharing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() How is this so good. What the heck. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was one of the most beautiful and realistic stories I have ever read. It was so genuinely prosaic and tragic, yet joyful and fulfilling at the same time. The writing was flawless and the characterizations were finely balanced between familiar and completely original, which was impressive. Basically, this is just about as close to perfect as fanfiction gets. I very much enjoyed reading this, thank you so much for sharing your work. This one goes in the favorites for sure. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved this. All the emotions. Characters are much more likable than traditional Edward and Bella. One of my favorites of the category, although there are no vamps. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this story. Its funny, and filled with all the emotions. I laughed and cried all the way through for the third time I think. |
![]() ![]() I've never cried and laughed at a fanfic ever before. Your language is amazing. Write a book! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story. Thanks :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Swear Edward pisses me off idk how Bella handles it “processingI’m processingBella I’m prosessing” I would be like process this and flip him off lmao that’s so annoying lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome story. I cried, I laughed. I blubbered Luke a baby when Edward and carlisle were talking. It was heart warming. Thank you for this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love how everything wrapped up amazingly and it really was a joy to read- very frustrating at times, but definitely a joy |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow! Poor Carlisle...Edward...Esme! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really love it and such an unconventional idea but I am getting so frustrated with Edward's doubts and both their lack of proper communication. Sigh |