Reviews for Innocent Sorrow
kin-kinna chapter 1 . 9/11/2009
nice
mysticwolf1896 chapter 1 . 9/1/2009
so depressing and yet so well written.
PeanutAngel chapter 1 . 8/21/2009
I think this was a marvelous attempt at your first D. Gray Man fic. I love how you used the first opening song as your title! It fits so well, of course! I also think your take on this scene (and DGM in general) is also a beautiful thing. I haven't seen many other people look at individual scenes (if they happened or not) like this. Amazing work, as always, and I can't wait to see more DGM fics from you!

Keep doing what ya love!

-PeanutAngel
pika318 chapter 1 . 8/21/2009
Many people have written about Allen and Mana, but yours is different in the way that there was more of Allen's inner thoughts and less dialogue. This fic is very well written too!

Some spelling mistakes.

'This is too much for me to bare' should be

'This is too much for me to bear'

You should write more _