|Reviews for Relationships|
| The 10th Wand chapter 1 . 3/7
lol is getting. People just have to keep bothering the admins. Nice story.
| Ashen Author chapter 1 . 2/14
| edboy4926 chapter 1 . 1/16
Good and funny story
| Savaris chapter 1 . 8/1/2011
Great one-shot! Found you and this after reading another fic that you co-writ with Epsilon Zeta (and my friend recommended this at almost the same level of Nanoha's "befriending" techniques).
Why didn't they do this and hook them up in the series? Yuuno had the potential to be one of the lead roles, while not one with firepower, he was the tactician and could have made the big bads move on the palm of his hands... and there could be offensive uses for his defensive magic like, I don't know, teleporting someone to the sun? Or how about slamming the barrier at someone at super-sonic speeds? Ah, I'm ranting. Anyway, nice work! I'll read the rest of this one's continuity next...
| CJNyfalt chapter 1 . 2/4/2011
| HubiKoshi chapter 1 . 10/27/2010
Ahhh it's such a shame they didn't do it this way in the series. This sure was an amusing little piece, with people blushing all over the place, and to think that the shy little Fate-chan started it... now that's something. Loved the references to Yuuno's incoming annihilation oh Chrono's hands, still i think Yuuno will get more teasing than firepower for this, Chrono just LOVES teasing Yuuno, he may even want In on the whole fun XD Though the person I'm worried about the most is Amy, she and Miyuki aren't friends for nothing, our little girls and a boy will BURN with embarrassment once Amy gets her hands on them XD
| GoldenDragon326 chapter 1 . 8/3/2010
O my gosh! This was great. .
Two major points I love:
"At least she didn't take pictures..."
"As far as we know..."
And number two:
""Remind me to give that girl such a befriending..." Nanoha muttered." .
Any MGLN fan can tell you what /that/ means. .
Off to read the rest of the stories. And I'll prolly go check out RadiantBeam's stories too. .
| k31tw1nd4v chapter 1 . 10/17/2009
As a YuuNaFa Fanshippers, I really glad to read this fic. Just Ignore those cowardly ... flamers ... troll. They don't like Yuuno have relationships with Nanoha and/or Fate, they should at least brave enough to sign their flames. They remind me of the old KotTF ( Knight of the True Fiance) back in the days of FFML who troll around and even have a Hack War which destroy a good amount of fanfic on the Ranma section.
So, Go on, pal, write more, and show them troll flamers that this kind of relationship can be done, and done with style, yeah! :d
| al103 chapter 1 . 8/29/2009
-More people should support the Yuuno/Nanoha/Fate threesome. Everyone wins in that solution!
Threesome FTW! :D
| just someone chapter 1 . 8/24/2009
I don't know if I should rage, cry or facepalm
This place is getting worse every day
| Fook chapter 1 . 8/23/2009
Some people take shipping way too seriously.
This fic, however, is hilariously great.
| Ilaria chapter 1 . 8/23/2009
I don’t understand, why would someone want to write something like this? This is mean and makes me feel so bad for Nanoha and Fate... they were so happy together in their little family with their daughter Vivio, I was reading the new manga and it was so heartwarming that I felt like crying of happiness. It was the best reading I have had in a while, but then I came here and found that people don’t like their beautiful relationship, and pair male characters with them... you even made Yuuno have sex with the two young mamas of the little Vivio... I don’t have words to express how you made me feel with this. So Nanoha and Fate never really loved each other; they were just waiting for a male... because honest and true love between two persons of the same gender can’t be something real, right? My heart hurts a little when I see how even fictional homosexual couples are treated like this.
| Alpha Draconis1 chapter 1 . 8/22/2009
To be honest, I wasn't a fan of your looping fanfics, especially since they were so OOC, but this. . . this. . .
This. . . gave me the best feeling I've had and made me feel better after a long day. Thanks.
| Sunder the Gold chapter 1 . 8/22/2009
Yeah, all three are the sorts to be married to their careers, but they're still human. Even if there's never a ceremony, rings or vows, at least two of these three are going to become lovers.
I'm a fan of the YuNaFei solution myself - unlike Tenchi, Ryoko and Ayeka, each of these three actually like each other. And unlike Tenchi, Yuuno is definitely interested in being in a romantic relationship with at least one of the girls, rather just than being their friend.
The idea of Yuuno and Fate gaving a kid that looks just like Vivio, blonde hair, red/green hetereochromia and all.
The potential uses of Yuuno's binding specialty also haven't escaped me, though I highly doubt it would be his own idea. (It would probably be Nanoha's.)
Heh. Hayate WOULD set up a bet, and the rig it by setting up the subjects of the bet. "Minx" indeed.
This was funny and cute. Your technical skills need some work, though.
Also, Nanoha wouldn't address her parents and older sister as "guys." Too informal.
| Anon from Viena chapter 1 . 8/22/2009
No, "The Shiny Sword", I'm not a nanofate shipper, I'm here to enjoy of tasteful fanfiction like everyone else, not to see how authors disrespect one of my most appreciated series with low quality fanfiction in order to troll us, the fans.