|Reviews for The Guardian and the Sage|
| ibelieveintruelove chapter 1 . 9/17/2009
I love it! I've always wondered about the relationship between Sola and Padme, and your story has definitely proved that the two sisters were closer than anything. The ending scene especially (I am so happy to learn that Padme lived in your version!) proved that even though Padme lied and made great sacrifices that caused falling outs with her family, Sola was willing to look past all of it and realize just how strong and wonderful her sister was. In this story, I can almost imagine a future where Padme is one day able to be reunited with her children, her husband, and her family on Naboo :) Nice job!
| x Mischief O.O Managed x chapter 1 . 8/22/2009
Good idea, few grammar mistakes, and has the potential to become a full story if you ever wanted to expand it. However, it's still complete as a one shot. Really enjoyed it!