Reviews for Let Your Mercy Fall on Me
Guest chapter 44 . 8/9/2018
this is a horrible ending to what could have been a good story. I wanted some outtakes the backlash Edward receives from the church community regarding Bella’s preganancy and their relationship. This just made me dislike the entire story even more than I did before. Very disappointed in this ending.
Stand by u chapter 44 . 1/16/2018
I really loved this fic!
It's very honest and true to life:)
Love,
Blair xxx
Payton79 chapter 44 . 1/15/2018
Thank you very much for this wonderful story. I really enjoyed reading it. I couldn't stop until I was through.
eieios chapter 17 . 5/5/2017
Here I am at chapter 17 of this story. I don't even know if you still get these reviews, but I wanted to let you know what I think. I keep reading the story because even though you say it is about Edward's fall, I see glimpses of Bella's salvation. I keep hoping that they will somehow meet in the middle. She will see the error of her ways and the grace of God, and he will love her through it. Also, I would like this story 100% more if Bella was 18 instead of 16, but that is probably because I have a 13 year old daughter. Just a mom's thoughts.
Cecily chapter 34 . 2/14/2017
I hope Jane her mother and Tanya are visited by god's wrath.
Cecily chapter 33 . 2/14/2017
So a whole high school of Christian loving kids prove to be hypocritical shits to Bella, that is not surprising at all.
Guest chapter 22 . 2/14/2017
Bella is so stupid ! She should have gone to the hospital and police to report the damn would be rapist!
ladymagna1100 chapter 44 . 6/22/2016
Although this story was completed about six years ago, I'm just now getting around to reading it. I enjoyed your fic immensely.
5262Lana chapter 5 . 4/16/2016
Why is it that Jasper and Rosalie have the same last name, when Jasper's dad is a alcoholic/ drug addict and Rosalie's dad is Rev. Carlisle?
hubi chapter 36 . 3/30/2015
Let Bella stay in her beliefs and not become a Jesus loving person
Guest chapter 38 . 12/26/2014
The doctor just informed them that they have a serious condition, bella or the baby could die. and renee's only response was "I'm going to go get some snacks" are u freaking kidding me? huh
Guest chapter 35 . 12/26/2014
Edward you shouldn't have return to that church. Go find another job seriously you're a college graduate (whats your major anyway?), it wouldn't be hard for you to move on. being close to God doesn't mean you have to work as His servant. its just weird that they welcome you back so easily. and what will you teach to your member? I mean it would be like big H for hypocrite for anything you'd say. js
Guest chapter 34 . 12/26/2014
You should just make his life miserable, bella. Dont be so nice to him. You have a right to bitch-ing him around, to be the meanest person ever. he deserves that treat for running away like some coward asshole he is. bleh
serious twilight chapter 44 . 7/5/2014
It was an interesting story. Shame, so many people were unhappy even at the end . Liked some of the religious dialogues though
Toni Masen chapter 44 . 10/1/2013
Well it turned out that Edward was just a red blooded male after all! I can't say as I was interested in the religious side of the story but a lot of it made sense (but I still won't be running off to church on Sunday). Renee was a nightmare, I would have left home if she'd been my Mother. For me, the story really picked up starting with chapter 19. An enjoyable read, thank you for writing.
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