Reviews for POem
Naruisawesome chapter 1 . 4/12/2013
"GET THE HELL OUT OF MY OFFICE BEFORE I CRUSH ALL OF YOU" ...Dang Naru. Lol!

Ahh poems...I just did those in my English...I hated them lol. Anyways, love the story! :)
Karmira chapter 1 . 9/26/2009
This is a really cute story. I loved the poetry play and the symbolism. The relationship between the brothers is great comedy and fun. Naru and Mai were very sweet. Also, I don't think you went too far from Naru's character.

However, it would be easier to read if it didn't have all the little mistakes in it. A proofreading or a beta would help that. If this story wasn't adorable, I might have quit it. Please consider it but don't get upset.
Moons-Chan chapter 1 . 8/22/2009
It's not every time I came by a poem fic, and I really like the results xD Please write more!
Blackraven4400 chapter 1 . 8/22/2009
Like this tory and i am glad that Mai and Naru got together. looking forward to more stories like that. like the poem. update soon please.