Reviews for Cat & Mouse
Guest chapter 14 . 8/21/2014
Great read. Thanks for sharing!
KMH1 chapter 14 . 7/20/2014
You have a knack for getting the characters core personalities and then bringing them forth. I liked how you made Bill more than a static character, especially with how he would make veiled insults, but on the surface be pleasant. You also had a great way of portraying the "trio" as well. I am curious as to how the whole thing with the Dursley's was resolved and it would be interesting to see a snapshot of how they adjusted to life in Grimmauld Place with Weasleys and a house elf. :)
Thanks for sharing and I look forward to reading more of your work.
Goten Askil chapter 14 . 3/29/2013
That's not often I get to read a story which is all at once good, quite dark, somewhat realistic, and a Harry/Ginny.

Frankly, I think I am much too often searching for such stories, and much too scarcely reading them, so I'd like to thank you for that one.

Goten Askil, a Franch reader
marinka chapter 14 . 2/20/2013
It is a great story and you have done so well telling it. I had now idea where the investigation was going till about half of the chapter before you told us. Loved how you portrayed both Harry and Ginny and all involved :)
crocadile1986 chapter 1 . 10/11/2012
love it!
darians-enemy chapter 1 . 4/29/2012
I'm always so pleased when something from SIYE comes to ... it's easier to read and more room to comment.

Ron is still a bit of an ass where his 'baby sister' is concerned.
hikarinayoshi chapter 14 . 11/7/2011
eepp!

i love this story

no matter how many time si read it!its just sooooo awesome!
CourtneyP chapter 14 . 9/11/2011
This was awsome, for real. You wrote it extremely well and I was always trying to think ahead like one does when reading the mystery novels. Excellent job and I loved every moment of reading it.
that lionhearted vagabond chapter 14 . 7/5/2011
Are you trying to kill me? You don't even say whether or not she says yes, I'm going to assume she does because I'm a secret romantic at heart. And you have now officially cleared everything up, so I'm happy, kinda, as happy as I can be now that this is over. I totally didn't expect that it would be George that made the complaint, but seeing as it wasn't really a complaint I guess it makes sense. I really want to sleep and I already said basically everything I want to say over the last fourteen chapters so I'll wrap this up by telling you one more time how much I love your plot, and mentioning something that I forgot to do previously. I loved ron's reaction to the breakup, when he took Harry's side and sent Ginny howlers, it was such a refreshing change from the protective, tactless Ron portrayed in many other fics, thank you one more time for posting this astonishing piece,

Punk
that lionhearted vagabond chapter 13 . 7/5/2011
I'm squealing like a pathetic fangirl at the impossibly minor Harry/Ginny moment there, thank you, I mean really, reducing me to a brainless fangirl. Anyway, that dramatic bit where Harry save Ginny was wonderful, as always, and his selflessness was in character, and his self proclaimed selfishness made me laugh. Harry's reaction when he woke up about seeing a Weasley chin had me cracking up, and I no longer feel creeped out now that the mystery has been solved (and expertly written I must say, I was completely in the dark until two chapters ago, and even then i was completely confused, you may just have converted me to mysteries), although that may have something to do sleep deprivation, seeing as it;s fifteen past one at the moment, but my impending tiredness tomorrow is so worth it, reading this fic had opened me to a while new level of possibilities when it comes to Harry and Ginny, and seeing as I've been complaining for ages about the lack of quality Harry/Ginny fanfiction on this sight makes it even more wonderful. One of the best thing sis that it wasn't just about Harry and Ginny and how awful they feel apart, and how perfect their relationship is, it was much more human, and the romance was just a side bit for the actual (mind blowingly awesome) plot, that had me on the very edge of my seat and writing out reviews as fast as I possibly could just so I could get onto the next chapter. I probably wouldn't have reviewed at all until I hit the next chapter if I didn't that you were such an amazing author that you deserved all the reviews you could get. Anyway, I have an epilogue to read,

Punk
that lionhearted vagabond chapter 12 . 7/5/2011
Cliff hanger, I need to read the next chapter soon, Sarah's story was heartbreaking, really, and to think that Harry had such a valiant supporter and her didn't even know it. It's criminals like Fenwick that are hard to hate, because despite everything you have to pity them just a little, unless of course he's targeting you directly in which case I'm sure hating him would be easy. The twist with the muggle surveillance helped as far as the figuring stuff out thing goes, and now I have to go read if Ginny gets tortured or not,

Punk (sorry for the diminutive length, I really need to find out what's going to happen)
that lionhearted vagabond chapter 11 . 7/5/2011
That bit with Harry and Ginny was sweet, and the dying Harry thing is making everything else really dramatic, this review's really short cause I really really really need to figure out what's gonna happen next, sorry,

Punk
that lionhearted vagabond chapter 10 . 7/5/2011
Things are starting to make sense! Woo, and Draco's involved which is always fun, I love how their relationship has evolved, and how Harry;s sense of nobility keeps him helping Draco, and how Draco always approaches him personally, that bit where he arrested Draco was funny. These notes aren't as creepy, but that's probably because the end is coming up, and at this point you're just wrapping up loose ends. The lead was really good, and makes sense, even if I'm still a bit confused about how he managed to get past the wards and all that (the old wards, not the new ones). But hopefully my confusion will be cleared up soon. I also want to know which weasley made the complaint so I can rant about them internally, I'm gonna go figure out all the crap that I'm confused about (or attempt to anyway),

Punk
that lionhearted vagabond chapter 9 . 7/5/2011
Harry's dying? Oh wow, didn't see that one coming. That flashback with George was really sad, the both of them, just. . . Oh! I'm slightly excited because I found the first mistake I've seen in this fic, and it makes me feel better about my writing to know that you're human to, petty isn't it? Anyway, if you care about fixing it it's in the note from the stalkers to Ginny, it says "Mrs Tonks will pay for you mistakes again" and you should be your, now that I've gotten over my moment of pettishness I must praise you yet again on your plot, the twists and turns, and little clues and everything, and the way you throw in all the relationship crap with Harry and Ginny in, and the drama about the weasley family, just wow, you completely amaze me, and now I have to go finish reading,

Punk
that lionhearted vagabond chapter 8 . 7/5/2011
It all makes sense now, poor Ginny, I no longer hate her at all, and poor Andromeda, who knows what's going on with her. And while I'm at it, poor all the dead people . . . Even though half of this makes sense I'm still beyond confused about the stalkers, I just can't think of who it could be. It would suck to be Harry, I mean really, I know some people complain 'cause he's moody all the time, but wouldn't you be too? Anyway, i'm loving it, and I can't wait until all the pieces click together so I'm gonna go finish this (I'm over halfway done!)

Punk
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