Reviews for Cat & Mouse
that lionhearted vagabond chapter 7 . 7/5/2011
I'm starting to hate Ginny. . . just grr, I'm not very articulate am I? That tin can thing was just disturbing, and the Andromeda Imposter was completely unexpected, I'm really wondering where she is. . . Anyway I'm going to continue and find out who the hell is in the hospital, thanks,

that lionhearted vagabond chapter 6 . 7/5/2011
OH MY GOD! That's it? That's why she broke up with him. . . wha-wha-what? I guess it makes sense, complete sense, but still...grrr. I loved Ron's speech,

"Okay. Please pay attention to the next part, because I don't really know how to tell you this and I'm only going to try once. I've never even pretended to understand how you two work. You get together by kissing in the common room, you break up, you give each other snogging sessions for birthday, you fight so fiercely even I'm afraid of you and then make up five minutes later, you break up and announce it in the Prophet before telling us, and when you're finally talking again, you shag each other instead of actually speaking. But – I can't believe I'm saying this – I heartily encourage you to continue whatever works so you can settle this thing," said Ron sincerely. "If not for yourself, then please do it for the rest of us, because we're going insane just watching aside."

It made me laugh so hard, and the flashbacks were fun as well. I'm loving this, and considering I'm not a mystery fan at all (My taste for it never developed past Scooby Doo) that's saying something, I'm gonna go read about the Weasley's reactions now,

that lionhearted vagabond chapter 5 . 7/5/2011
I might to finally find out why the hell Ginny broke up with him. You managed to creep me out again, with the Piers thing. . . and the happy attitude was weird. May I just say that you're plot blows my mind, I mean really, you have all these clues, and little tidbits of information that reveal nothing, the cat and mousse thing was kind of cool though. I can't come up with any other word for the flashbacks other than nostalgic, well actually bittersweet works as well. I'm reading the next chapter now,

that lionhearted vagabond chapter 4 . 7/5/2011
I wasn't expecting the thing with the dursleys, and that thing with Teddy about the tournament, where they kidnapped him, and cut his arm freaked me out again, you know you're really good at that don't you? I hope Ron's okay, and I'm gonna guess that the attack on Privet Drive, with half the house being blown out had something to do with the attack on the potters at Godric's hollow, but I could quite possibly be wrong. It's just all of these things have to do with harry's past, and creeping him out of course. Poor George, having to worry about getting a note from his dead brother that's not really from his dead brother. . . on another note, the escape from Azkaban was weird though, because I don't think it's death eaters, they were never ones to play with their prey, I suppose I'll figure it out as the story goes along, thanks for posting,

that lionhearted vagabond chapter 3 . 7/5/2011
You managed to creep me out again, that thing with Teddy, and cursing his bear... that's just... I don't even know how to describe that, this is freakin amazing by the way. At least I know how they're getting the information now, but I'm still confused at how they're getting past the wards, and why Ginny broke up with Harry, especially her comment about figuring it out eventually, which implies that he did something that should be obvious... sorry thinking out loud, I guess the only thing to do is to keep reading, so I'm gonna go ahead and do that,

that lionhearted vagabond chapter 2 . 7/5/2011
Oh wow, I know this is completely fictional, and you created it out of your head, but that last line, where it said that the handwriting was Sirius', and the note itself, with that line about the tournament . . . really really creeped me out. Still loving workaholic Harry, and that bit in the beginning with Hermione and Harry, and Hermione not wanting him to get hurt again was really sweet, you've written their brother/sister relationship really well, and Kingsley's promise to Remus and his resulting closeness to Harry was wonderful, I'm going to go get even more creeped out now by reading the next chapter, congrats on giving me chills,

that lionhearted vagabond chapter 1 . 7/5/2011
I'm loving this so far, you're a very talented author. When I first started reading I kept thinking that the 'addicted' thing was an odd way to start, but then I got into the chapter and forgot about it until I came to the end, and suddenly it all made sense. I love how you tied the beginning and the end together, and that line "when it came to Ginny Weasley, Harry was addicted to heartbreak." Dear god, beautiful, honestly and poetically beautiful, I loved it. You're characterization of Ron was wonderful, and that bit at the end with Hermione knowing Harry was wonderful, and so so true. I'm really going to enjoy reading about workaholic I'm gonna go ahead and read the rest of the story now, 'cause I can't wait to find out several things, such as why Ginny broke up with Harry (especially so cruelly), who the hell is sending these letters to Ginny, if Harry's theories are correct, and if so which one (though i do think they're trying to get to Harry through Ginny) and if that wound is going to scar, because scarred Harry is hot. . . Anyway, thanks for posting, I'm gonna go quench my curiosity now,

jiw123 chapter 14 . 6/3/2011
its approximately 3am local time for me which should give you some indication of just how good a fiction this is. Having started it this evening I've been unable to stop reading it! The twists, turns and subtleties throughout this fic make it a cut above the rest...if your not already you should really consider becoming a professional author; I would buy your books (and your the only person on this site I could honestly say that to atm).

I haven't actually looked at your profile yet but I'm certainly going to look to see if you've written any more books...the summary of this fic could do with some improvement to make it stand out even more!)
shine lots chapter 14 . 5/27/2011
Second time reading this. I'm so so glad it's finished. I wouldn't want to wait to find out what happens.
shine lots chapter 13 . 5/27/2011
This story needs many more reviews
shine lots chapter 10 . 5/27/2011
Now that we know the 'cat' is Fenwick the entire story seems a lot less scary. Basicaly I felt uneasy about the faceless murderer.
shine lots chapter 7 . 5/27/2011
now that i reflect on it you gave us a chapter that we really need. It was a great change of pace to go from the murder-mystery who-done-it style of chapter to resolving all the relationship drama. SO thanks
shine lots chapter 6 . 5/27/2011
Reding the reviews, I can tell that other people also seem to think that the number of reviews don't reflect the quality of the story. Your story is outstanding!
shine lots chapter 5 . 5/27/2011
I hate that meanancing cat! He's spreading dissent between everyone Harry has a trusting relationship with, breaking bonds of trust, and causing everyone to doubt each other when they need to stick together. On the other hand, the cat is very SCARY and CUNNING. I'll give him that.
shine lots chapter 4 . 5/27/2011
What do you mean enlightenment! Such an ironic title! That chapter just got a whole lot more confusing. That chapter totally took Enigmatic Evil to an entirely elevated level. I'm so worried for the characters and the only thing I can be thankful for is that you have finished the story and I came across this compelling read when the mystery was already solved!
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