Reviews for Alchemy and Magic
Ribbonseal chapter 4 . 12/5/2009
you have a bit of random minor mistakes but none I can remember after reading all the chaps. Heheh, oh gawd that was rich! I started madly giggling after reading Gryffindor funny.

Edward has really horrible reaction to the dementors, doesn't he? I always imagine what the boggart scene will be lyk, in the DADA class. Shall it be as violent?
Kari Suttle chapter 4 . 12/2/2009
Great story you got going here! Its definetally going on my faves! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Inverness chapter 4 . 12/2/2009
What is the point of sorting if people can just tell the hat where they want to go? I'd like to think Harry Potter is an exception.
sanddunee chapter 4 . 11/30/2009
Gryffindor badass fits Edward very very well, good choice indeed.
777angeloflove chapter 4 . 11/29/2009
PinkPsych00 chapter 4 . 11/29/2009
Poor Slytherin girls, they didn't get any Ed.. x)

And indeed, this chapter IS long! The chapters are getting slightly longer each time (I've been reading this fic since the second chapter was posted or something - but never reviewed *gets hit by a rock*).

Anyways, it's a great fic and I can't wait to see the storyline develop further (I'm rather curious; we're at a point where really anything can happen!).
Ryuuk96 chapter 4 . 11/29/2009
haha i can't stop haha laughing! good job ed!
Hina Kita chapter 4 . 11/28/2009
Hey the story is great I like Ed beating up Mafoy funny as Hell. Can't wait to see how much longer Ed can keep his cool. UPDATE SOON! please :3
Hikaru2322 chapter 4 . 11/28/2009
LOVIN IT! Please update soon!
OhJay chapter 4 . 11/28/2009
Yay update! I don't have any plot suggestions, but I would like it if you could update a bit more. I know you have a life and stuff, but I'm just saying...
CrimsonKitsune333 chapter 4 . 11/28/2009
This chapter was really cool! awesome job, cookies for you!
WolfXArcher chapter 4 . 11/28/2009
great story so far! and like you requested, i am reviewing and i hope you do the boggart scene with ed. i always think that part is the best with this kind of story! so keep updating! :P

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Runey9 chapter 4 . 11/28/2009
I like this story a lot so far! can't wait for the next chapter!

When will Ed find out about, well, Harry's adventures?

Nice job! :)
Unleash The Shadow chapter 4 . 11/28/2009
A much more better chapter than the first, I must say D

The only problem I saw are some unencessary phrases, but it'll come with time D

Good luck on the next chapter D
Yasmina Michaelovna chapter 1 . 11/5/2009
In general, this story works very very well. A minor thing: Ed seems to be slightly over-reacting to some things (not short jokes, though :D), and maybe not quite "I will do this myself"-ish enough. Everything else is perfect, though. You are very good at portraying emotions.

I think this is actually the only story I've seen so far with Ed as a student that I've actually liked.

So, kudos.

Can has more please?
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