Reviews for Who You'd be Today
Darkflame's Pyre chapter 2 . 2/17/2012
You are really good at writing tragedy. My heart ached the entire read. *Sobs*
JoTracy123 chapter 2 . 8/9/2011
aww that was so sad yet it was sweet xx thanks for mention. still don't get where Virg was in thiis. anyway if i ever need a cry i know what to read lol xxxxxxxxxxxx
zeilfanaat chapter 2 . 5/22/2011
And great second chapter too! Very moving. Thanks for sharing.
zeilfanaat chapter 1 . 5/22/2011
Snif, snif. Great story! Very sad though. Love the ending though. Thanks for sharing!
Teobi chapter 1 . 11/9/2010
Nooooooo! *sobs even harder* Not John! seriously though, this was a beautiful little story, really very touching. John's self-sacrifice, right to the bitter end, being buried next to his mother *sob* and Gordon's child named in honour of their fallen brother and comrade.

*sniff* this is too much... e_e
MelodyCurious chapter 2 . 9/16/2010
That was beauitful, thank you
Math Girl chapter 2 . 9/5/2010
You... killed... John? But... But... Aww, no. Bad dream, gotta be. You're at work on chapter two right now, aren't you, Sam? This was scary and well-written, but please bring him back...!

Christine
Silver Bee chapter 2 . 9/5/2010
I really hate deathfics! Which sounds like a bad review but is actually a compliment. When they're done well, like this, they have such a strong emotional impact on the reader and the feeling of sadness is hard to shake for a while afterwards. Off to have a good cry now. A lovely story, but so terribly sad! Bee
Ms Hobgoblin chapter 2 . 9/2/2010
You know, I have no idea how I missed the first part, but I am sure glad the alert worked for chapter 2!

Beautifully written, sobbing is definatly part of this little fic.

More, more, more :)

Hob x
bubzchoc chapter 2 . 9/2/2010
great story had tears in my eyes
LucyMaxine chapter 2 . 9/2/2010
This is great! Can't wait for the next part!
Loopstagirl chapter 2 . 9/2/2010
*gasp*

How on earth do I even manage to put into a review how gorgeous this was! Definitely need a tissue warning, this chapter made me cry just as the last one did, and that was with knowing what was coming. The emotions and feelings were captured so perfectly, absolutely heartbreaking!
Angel-Sue76 chapter 2 . 9/2/2010
Aww that was so sad but very touching too. Even in his last moments he was still trying to comfort his brother. Hate the fact that you killed Johnny off but it was so well written I'll forgive ya.
criminally charmed chapter 2 . 9/1/2010
You just love to torture Tracys, don't you? I know: potkettle. But MINE live.

Very sad and nicely handled.
Agent Nova chapter 2 . 9/1/2010
Beautiful sadness.

I was deeply moved by the first chapter when you initially posted it, but now that you've added this, I find myself all the more so. I didn't think it would be possible to be pushed further into sorrow until now. Again, such vividness, and with even more emotion this time. And John's pain - truly heartbreaking. It's so awful to imagine how the others are going to carry on without him.

Thank you for touching my soul with such a brilliant, well-crafted, thought-provoking story...I'm off to go and get some much needed chocolate ice-cream now. :)

Sue.
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