|Reviews for Red and White|
| Guest chapter 11 . 4/13
This is waaaayyyy too adorable!
| Neon Wish chapter 11 . 4/13
Snowy, please make up with Rangiku!
| samira vangola chapter 10 . 2/14
| Jazzybella chapter 10 . 6/30/2014
I stumbled upon this wonderful story, and so glad I did. This is so sweet, I appreciate hwo you are working with the characters and making them your own. The plot is sweet, timing is on spot. I do hope you continue with this story. Truly enjoyable!
| LoveGlutton chapter 7 . 2/17/2014
I thought he was going to give him the sex talk
| LoveGlutton chapter 5 . 2/16/2014
I don't think shes like Lt. iss
| squirley2000 chapter 10 . 1/26/2014
love this one cant wait for u to update with next chapter
| SaIsae chapter 3 . 11/5/2013
Let me just point this out to relief my itch...
"Then" and "Than" are 2 very different things...
Please specify and add more details as to whom you're talking about, like a "certain girl" made me thought for a moment that another person came into the conversation...
There is also the part where you tend to make a lot of typographical errors...
Perhaps a beta reader would be fitting...
Another advice is to actually put descriptions in the dialogue like the last chapter 'Don't listen to Rukia-nee and blah', add something like "There was a crumpled paper atop the contents of the box with a message scribbled haphazardly, [enter content of the paper]"
I really hope you improve and to limit the OOC-ness...
The over-all story was interesting but the language was very confusing...
| MysticalNyla chapter 10 . 8/15/2013
interesting story please do update this story.
| FreeTraderBeowolf chapter 10 . 3/14/2013
Well, it looks like you have plans for this little date to have hollow trouble.
| FreeTraderBeowolf chapter 4 . 3/14/2013
This fanciful is so adorable.
| MomoPeachFlower chapter 10 . 1/28/2013
Damnit, I don't want to wait
But there is no more so I guess I dnot have a choice.
| TheSkandranon chapter 10 . 1/25/2013
Rangiku giving up sake? SCARY! The world is ending, lol.
Fun chapter, can't wait for the next one
| IchiRukiLover chapter 10 . 1/24/2013
ahh awesome chapter! I can't wait for the next one! xp
| AnimeXMangaAddict chapter 9 . 12/14/2012
Gods, I'm really finding Toshiro hilarious right now :) I can't wait for ur next update