Reviews for Journey to the East
JJ Rust chapter 2 . 5/15/2011
Good chapter. You have a pretty cool mystery going here. Looking forward to reading more.
JJ Rust chapter 1 . 5/12/2011
Pretty good story. Good job on making the characters distinct. You dive pretty quickly into the plot. The action was pretty good.

A couple critiques, you should have some noticable breaks to denote scene transitions.

A couple typos I spotted: "When said I" should be "When I said I"

"you're Majesty" should be "your Majesty"

Looking forward to continue this story. Keep up the good work.
mage-cat chapter 7 . 3/15/2010
This is a great story. You really hit the right notes for the characters. The only thing the bothers me is that you could mark perspective shifts more clearly. I always have to reread the last few lines when you switch between groups of characters.
Howl chapter 7 . 12/7/2009
Wonderful, though, in my own opinion, it would be good to seperate the alternating POVs more.
Fan Boy 101 chapter 7 . 10/28/2009
Great chapter. Please update soon.
anon chapter 7 . 10/23/2009
All things are true but few accurate that is awesome

Thanks for talking about the beasts

This is so awesome
Storyseeker chapter 7 . 10/23/2009
Great read! Was Sun talking to Quong or Dingo and lot, at the end?
Olreic chapter 6 . 10/8/2009
Finally, another chapter!

Really good, as usual. I'm not really good with love, but it looks like Griff and Sakura might finnish together.

"It's not much better topside." Lol, for maybe the first time in his life, Fang said something intelligent.

Great idea to introduce the Monkey King. And good work about all these clear explanations...
Storyseeker chapter 6 . 10/7/2009
Nice chapter! Loved the bit about Yama telling Sakura more about what happened in the war!

I never read anything about the Monkey King, but I remember seeing a character based on him in the Jackie Chan cartoon. He was a real prankster, sometimes dangerous for taking his jokes/spells too far, ideal for the 3rd race!
anon chapter 6 . 10/7/2009
That was so cool talking about magic and meeting Monkey King

Daymare HA

Well I’m not sure surly it was some of Oberon’s Children and the New Olympians with some of that at least I thought (hoped) there would also be creatures like actual griffins

Oh yeah I forgot Desdemona and Iago changed thier names with the cyborg blah blah blah

Oh yeah isn’t Fu-Lion supposed to be part of Brooklyn’s Timedancer adventures part of his new family and his mate Katanna

That was so awesome mentioning the Pendragon stuff and so much other parts of Gargoyles mythology

Could we maybe see a little bit or just mention Macbeth

Could you also mention the Illuminati I think they were at least at the top levels long-term focused well intentioned perhaps fanatically because I’m not sure why but I always believed that episode where they brainwashed Goliath or some other episode one of them shook hands and was a gargoyle and Thailog is a lower level member like David

Although there are gargoyle villains like Demona and Iago/Coldsteel so that would be okay it’s just that with David reforming so maybe they are well-meaning but covet power for themselves first and foremost but want to control a just and merciful world second

Are we going to see mention of the other clans including the ones that were set to appear in the future New Olympus

• Xanadu (China)

• New Camelot (Antarctica)

• Loch Ness (Scotland)

Korea

• Queen Florence Island (Canada)

• Paris (France

the Labrynth mutates and clones

Oh yeah the Ultra-Pack Wolf, Jackal and Hyena, the next two Coyote 6.0 and 7.0 get out of David’s control and a new member I thought perhaps Dingo’s super villain rival the Tazmanian Tiger They’d be kind of Cool, while I’d like them to seek redemption as well it just doesn’t seem realistic and they should be villains

I got this information from the Askgreg page there is a link in gargoyles wiki page

This is AWESOME!
Fan Boy 101 chapter 6 . 10/7/2009
Another awesome chapter. Can't wait for the next one.
Olreic chapter 5 . 9/18/2009
Man! Did you have to stop here ?

Lol, Fang forgot he could fly... probably my favourite part.

So, Yama has mated ? I wouldn't have thought that, but whatever...
Olreic chapter 1 . 9/11/2009
Awesome. Thanks for making a fic about the Redemption Squad: really like this group.
Fan Boy 101 chapter 5 . 9/6/2009
Oh boy! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Storyseeker chapter 5 . 9/2/2009
Nice chapter, but I'm not sure many other Japanese would agree with Yama about their country's defeat being a blessing at all... In 1945, the Atom Bomb(s) killed an estimate of over 200,0 people, and even today some scientists believe that radiation from the bomb has left some of their population sick. It may have been a blessing to the rest of the world, but not to Japan.
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