Reviews for Alice's Story
content1 chapter 12 . 10/5/2009
I like your take on how they met and how they joined the family. I intentionally waited to read this as I am abou to start my chapter on Jasper and Alice. I think you have given me a good basis to work from.
MysteryGirlxx chapter 12 . 9/1/2009
this is the end? no..i dont want it to end! even though it has to coz we all know the rest.

well this story was amazing and i cant wait to read your next one!

Edwardfan1997 chapter 12 . 9/1/2009
yay! finally we get to see the expression on Edward's face! hee hee! so funny! lolish story!
Fanpire17 chapter 11 . 8/31/2009
Edwardfan1997 chapter 11 . 8/31/2009
hee hee! i cant wait til edward gets his bedroom stolen! itll be so funny!
randomlymad79 chapter 10 . 8/30/2009
very good story
cullenbabe95 chapter 1 . 8/29/2009
omg that is soo sad i wouldnt do that to my daughter if i had one even if she was seeing visions of the future
Edwardfan1997 chapter 10 . 8/29/2009
wow! this is good! i cant wait til it cmes to the part where they steal Edward's bedroom. You HAVE to describe his expression!

this is fantastic!
kassc96-72 chapter 9 . 8/29/2009
that was so amazing!
Edwardfan1997 chapter 9 . 8/29/2009
Edwardfan1997 chapter 8 . 8/28/2009
Anniie chapter 8 . 8/28/2009
I think it is the best!
Edwardfan1997 chapter 7 . 8/27/2009
wow, this is amazing!
Christina chapter 7 . 8/27/2009
I think it is awesome
Edwardfan1997 chapter 6 . 8/26/2009
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