|Reviews for The Forsaken|
| SOL4RIS3 chapter 3 . 7/26
So r not going to update anymore?
And if U R not then atleast update a chapter about it...
I'm saying this cause this was really nice...
| reviewer chapter 3 . 1/25
| Sailor Pandabear chapter 3 . 11/24/2014
| godess bubbles chapter 3 . 11/3/2014
I believe Hiruzen had 2 sons...But makes no difference to me! I'm liking this so far!Update soon!
| Bladre MKT chapter 3 . 9/20/2014
im actually quite impressed whit this, a few over the top shots, but not bad at all, very fun read
| Kittens Kat chapter 3 . 7/3/2014
THIS STORY IS GREAT! I HOPE YOU UPDATE SOON! THANK YOU!
| Publicola chapter 1 . 5/19/2014
I really really like this story and how you went about responding to the challenge. I particularly appreciate your depiction of Tsunade, for paying attention to her not-so-nice qualities (she's a lazy drunk, at this point) without descending into the realm of outright bashing. I really wish you would continue this fic, and there are so many avenues that seem promising here. Keep up the great work!
| anifan chapter 3 . 5/14/2014
This was getting good. I hate that this fic has died.
| MayumiRose chapter 3 . 4/20/2014
I really do like this story, and hope you come back to add more to it!
| ghost boy 952 chapter 3 . 3/24/2014
It is stated that Asuma is konohamarus uncle
| jhawk046 chapter 3 . 12/13/2013
Well it is almost three (3) years. I am still waiting for the next chapter of this well written story.
You said that you were working on it in 2011. What happened did your lap top go boom?
| Myra the Dovahkiin chapter 3 . 10/7/2013
great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting.
I think Asuma has a brother, but he was never mentioned. Oh well, your idea works to.
| Rosewind Trill chapter 3 . 6/21/2013
Please update soon this is quite good
(also have you considered making Sasuke infertile so that he is only useful to Orochimaru as a body)
| chaos267 chapter 3 . 6/9/2013
You know this fic has a different atmosphere then other fics i've read but its still really good. I hope you contiue the perverted hinata was humerous and how you did the council was well done. All in all a good fic hope you contiue
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/27/2013
ANOTHER UNFINISHED STORY! WTF!? STOP...CUTING...THEM OOFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF!