|Reviews for Unbreakable Road|
| sherry williams chapter 5 . 11/9/2011
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| wellHIthere chapter 45 . 10/20/2011
awww no fair *sniffle* it-its over! no it cant be that was great i loved it i am glad though with how the whole story played out no childeren like every other fic it was perfect and everything that i wanted and expected but even more it surprised me so with the best of luck and love a random reveiwer :P
| wassup321ishere chapter 24 . 10/19/2011
LOfreakingL you googled it! LOLthats awsome i love the story
| jaspersmate81 chapter 45 . 10/16/2011
I absolutely loved your story! I wish you would write a sequel. Keep up the good work.
| Fleur24 chapter 34 . 10/16/2011
Yep Everyone's pissed at Edward!
""Rosalie stood up, knocking her chair to the ground and threw her hands in the air, "I wasn't joking, Dad." She said sarcastically, "Edward is not the perfect son you make him out to be. He and Alice have done a lot of things that we were unaware of. They are using their gifts to manipulate people! You put everyone else on the back burner for him, including your wife, and it needs to stop. Open your fucking eyes, Carlisle."" Go Rosalie! Tell it like it is!
So glad that Carlisle pissed at Edward too.
""He turned my head and kissed my forehead, "We better get back in there in case Carlisle explodes." I couldn't contain the giggle that escaped my lips. I found the thought of Carlisle exploding with anger quite humorous. He was always so reserved and quiet."" That would be hilarious!
I'm glad that Carlisle and Esme seemed to have made up.
HAHA yep Carlisle really proud that his biologetical son is faster than Edward.
I'm glad Eli punched him, Carlisle deffinitely deserved it.
| Fleur24 chapter 27 . 10/16/2011
I'm glad that Esme found Eli. He's a pretty cool guy.
I think Jasper is right about Edward knowing that Abigail was pregnant.
So Esme and Rosalie are going back to Forks. That's good. I'm glad that Bella can tell Charlie about vampires.
""We were all shocked when Eli stood and smiled. He held out his hand to Edward, "Edward, my old friend. How are you?"
Old friend? Of course!
It was just as I suspected. Edward did know Abigail was pregnant, however, I didn't expect him to know Eli. The shock and anger coming off of the others was overwhelming.
Edward shook his hand, "Eli, it's nice to see you again.""
Yep Jasper was right. Edward knew Abigail was pregnant, but it seems that Edward didn't tell Eli about him being a Cullen too.
""Eli turned to the rest of us, "I would like to introduce you to a dear friend of mine. This is Edward Masen. Edward, this is-"
I didn't let Eli finish. Edward knew who we were, so I chuckled darkly and said, "Cullen. His last name is Cullen."
Eli shook his head in confusion, "Excuse me?"
I pointed at Edward, "His name is Edward Masen Cullen."
Eli pulled his lip up over his teeth and his eyes darkened. For the first time since we met him, Eli looked like a vampire."" UH oh Edward's in huge trouble! YAY! About time.
| Fleur24 chapter 25 . 10/16/2011
""Jasper started to read, "It says, Abigail Lillian West died in her home, while giving birth to her only son on January 19, 1921. She is survived by her mother Judith West and son Eli Cullen."" Eli's a hybrid, that's why Abigail died giving birth to him.
Poor Esme! Its bad enough knowing that Carlisle lied to her for eighty years about loving someones else, but finding out that Abigail gave birth to his son, has to be worse.
| Fleur24 chapter 23 . 10/16/2011
I feel really bad for Esme!
I Think Edward should do what Jasper said and leave Bella Alone.
| Fleur24 chapter 19 . 10/16/2011
I'm that Gianna going to be able to come back to La Push with Jacob, after he lets the Volturi experiment on him.
Uh oh, Jasper's gonna be jealous!
| Fleur24 chapter 18 . 10/16/2011
I'm glad that Rose and Bella are hanging out. Its good for them. Bella needs a new girlfriend to hang out with and a sister, who'll actually listen to her.
Like Rosalie, I also like this new Bella.
I also like how She's gonna help Bella find out about Abigail.
""I don't know what Jacob's plans are, but even if he comes I'm sure he won't mind."
"He reminds me of Emmett, in dog form." She said laughing.
I giggled, "It's funny you say that. He told me he would probably be in love with you if you weren't a vampire, but yeah, he is a little like Emmett."
"Speaking of Emmett, I'm sorry about last night. He's just really protective of you."
"I know."" That's really pretty cool. Emmett and Jake are alot alike.
| Fleur24 chapter 16 . 10/16/2011
AWE Poor Emmett! He thinks of Bella as his little sister.
OMG so that is where Edward gets it from.
I can't believe Carlisle did that. Edward is the real leader of the Cullen Coven.
I hope Bella finds out Abigail.