Reviews for The Substance of Things Hoped For
azab chapter 1 . 11/9/2009
good job :
Red Bess Rackham chapter 1 . 11/5/2009
Very interesting... You packed quite the mix of emotion into very few words. I specially loved the line, "Of course he kisses her back, because he's Boone and she's Shannon and they're them." That was brilliant. Well done!

~Red
Delia Lavender chapter 1 . 8/26/2009
That was interesting...and chilling...both at the same time! I really enjoyed it. A lot said in a small space.
ILoveNeil chapter 1 . 8/23/2009
This was good. My favorite line was: Of course he kisses her back, because he's Boone and she's Shannon and they're them.