|Reviews for A New Life Revisited|
| LifeAnomaly chapter 1 . 1/5/2013
The movie ended completely differently but that's not all that I wanted to say. While I love your plot and your dedication to detail I have to say, and this is just an opinion, that you were trying a little too hard to make it sexy. While detail is great for some plot lines, it dampers others and while I believe you are an excellent writer, I just thought you'd want some creative feed back. I know I appreciate it myself.
As another tip, for sex scenes with any gender, pick one or two sexual positions/acts and build your way up from there.
Happy writing! ;)
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/17/2012
Wow. That is all I have to say. Wow. It was absolutely divine. I loved it!
| alykat14 chapter 1 . 1/25/2012
Good story so far. I love this pairing :)
| QueenHatshepsut chapter 1 . 7/1/2011
I really don' remember if i reviewed this or nt, n in case i didn', i just wantd 2 say that i really liked it and ur an amazing writer, and i would have preferred to PM you, bt seeing as the handy lil PM button escaped me on tha mobile edition, i'll just do this instead. I don' remember nw, bt u said that you have some stories that you had that you could send and i would really like to read them.
and don' worry bout seeming desperate, im kind of a review-whore myself! SHHH...DON' TELL NEBDY I SAID THAA, LOL!
| PartyLikeItsGoingOutOfStyle chapter 1 . 3/14/2011
Oh my...:O (good oh my)
| xXxOtAkU-444xXx chapter 1 . 2/13/2010
I like it! **
| Dowash chapter 1 . 12/5/2009
This was amazing, darling :)
The beginning was interesting, I don't think I've ever read a story that started like that Not to mention this was extremely hot and more than enough descriptive *grins* I like reading descriptive sex-scenes .
Very well written altogether, love. Applauds to you.
| Tina chapter 1 . 8/29/2009
I liked it! You should definitely write more about these too! I agree with the person who said you should write one about their first time. You should also write one where Pogue's on top. I think you'd do an excellent job!
| Danteluvr4eva chapter 1 . 8/26/2009
i liked this one...r u gonna keep goin with this one too?
| witch20 chapter 1 . 8/25/2009
| Riot161 chapter 1 . 8/24/2009
You should totally write the story of the first time! its sounds interesting... and hot lol
| julliette chapter 1 . 8/23/2009
this was a good one