Reviews for Fracture
Checkerz chapter 1 . 11/30/2013
*gasp* You horrible hoodlum! Update at once!
RavenIdiot chapter 1 . 9/10/2012
I really liked this piece of work. Jess' caginess seems very much in character, as is his habit of making up cover stories to try to convince people everything's okay (even though it's clearly not.) I also liked the bit about him having his hair down, since it's one of the first signs something's *really* off (that and he probably couldn't style it with just one arm.)

Thanks for sharing.
walkersystem chapter 1 . 12/18/2011
No one ever finishes Jess stories :(
Ghostwriter chapter 1 . 4/29/2011
Ooooh. Are you gonna continue in this reality, cause I really like it. Hope to see more of this reality. Catch ya on the flip side.
BabyGlover chapter 1 . 8/30/2010
keep it going
Toni chapter 1 . 2/14/2010
I-Get-Bored chapter 1 . 2/1/2010
This is really really good. You have to keep going ] !
juniper294 chapter 1 . 1/4/2010
very well written. sad, but good
onepiecefreec chapter 1 . 12/4/2009
Dude, this could be such an awesome fic! You should definately continue it!
Christine Writer chapter 1 . 10/28/2009
cHoCoLaTe-cHiHuAhUa chapter 1 . 10/24/2009
Really interesting start- I love that you took it from this episode. I can't wait to see an update!
Coalie chapter 1 . 10/11/2009
Please update this story. I love it. I need more to read.
Sianne chapter 1 . 10/2/2009
This was awesome. Update soon. :)
paper-fl0wers chapter 1 . 9/27/2009
Hey, this is really good. Update soon. Love Jess 3
Evil Remy chapter 1 . 9/1/2009
I really enjoyed this

Hope you update soon!

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