Reviews for AFW2: The Heroes that Rise, the Heroes that Fall
willwrite4fics chapter 26 . 12/12/2010
Very nice action scene. Easy to follow what was happening. Pity that Lowlight needed to leave to evac their teammate since he was the only non-wounded one. Poor battered two Joes, they're tough.. going on with their mission.
willwrite4fics chapter 24 . 12/7/2010
Yep! Looks much better! I have issues with the site reformatting stuff sometimes too. I have to recheck stuff to be sure it hasn't removed all manner of things! Excellaaaaaant.
AF Iron 135 chapter 24 . 12/2/2010
Doggoneit, it wouldn't even let me use the brackets in the REVIEW! Now I'm really frustrated. I'll have to change the Borovians foreign language in other brackets one can understand, either [], {}, ##, , or something similar. I'll re-check this review to make sure that is working. I've already taken up ** with Snake-Eyes sign language...
AF Iron 135 chapter 25 . 12/2/2010
Willwrite for fics... thank you for your honest edit of this chapter. In all honesty this site has been frustrating because it hasn't accepted a lot of keyboard symbols I use. For instance, I broke up lines with five asterisks ***** but had to delete the chapters and change them with five X's XXXXX. I'm not sure how many chapters of mine have bad shifts for that reason. In this particular chapter, an enemy speaking borovian was supposed to have brackets around them, like . so this is me speaking borovian right now, I hope you can see the brackets. anywho... time is something I don't have much of, but this bothers me enough to try to change it in the near future. Again, thanks for the heads-up, I'll review this one. (Scarlett too "marysue"? Haha... yea, maybe. She's still young and growing up. Not quite yet the same Scarlett of the comics. Yet!)

-AF Iron
eqgzmama chapter 25 . 11/21/2010
I have really enjoyed! Love the action! Very realistic and keeps moving.
Phoenix51 chapter 25 . 11/20/2010
Low-light Amazed? Now that is something. Go Flag!
Quathis chapter 25 . 11/20/2010
Whoa! Once again the balance of power shifts twice in one chapter. It was interesting to see things from the Borovian's POV, right up till that surprise bombing by the Flagg. Good chapter. Until next time.
willwrite4fics chapter 25 . 11/20/2010
Although I'm not a fan of your version of Scarlett(too marysue), your writing has always been remarkably good. Until this chapter. I'm not sure if it lost formatting being loaded or if you rushed to get it posted. You have tense changes in a single sentance, no quotes around people speaking, and it's very choppy and mishmashed. Puzzling, especially in a fic that has to date contained really GOOD writing style. I hope to see an improved version or next chapter. Happy writing.
Quathis chapter 24 . 11/13/2010
Certainly an upswing from last time, but a bittersweet one with the cost. The pace is on a low tempo now, though that could change at any time, and the suspense is very pronounced. Nice job. Until next time.
Phoenix51 chapter 24 . 11/12/2010
So close to their team mates and yet so far away.

Another fantastic chapter, please continue!
Rishtalak chapter 23 . 11/11/2010
Man, I'm on the edge of my seat here! Hope you update soon!
Quathis chapter 23 . 11/1/2010
Intense. Only word that does it justice. Great action that really draws you in and makes you worry about the people fighting. Grand Slam's death scene did its job well. Lit a fire in me that wanted to take out the punks you messed with the Joes. Until next time.
AtlantisGirl12 chapter 23 . 10/30/2010
This was really good and well described. The only concrit I have is that you can't pull a grenade pin out with your teeth. ;)
Dasz chapter 23 . 10/29/2010
Yay, yet another great chapter! I'm too tired to bother with logging in, but I couldn't resist reading the next installment! Thanks for updating so quickly! I have to admit, Chapter 22 wasn't exactly your most gripping work, but now that I've read Chapter 23, I can see that it was necessary to set up this intense set of events. Once again, you've seamlessly blended the G.I. Joe fantasy universe with the gritty realism of (what seems to me, at least) to be the genuine emotions of a combat situation. Thanks again!
TVO chapter 22 . 10/23/2010
Pretty short and uneventful chapter. I mean its not bad, but the last couple chapters have been VERY slow. This one felt like it could've been a small part of a larger chapter.

Thanks for the update. Please update again soon.
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