Reviews for GI Joe: The Rise of CGI
Brainiac 5 chapter 10 . 12/9/2009
Sepukku... ha! Yesh. Ah, another good entry. I loved Rex's gollum imitation, and how Storm Shadow manages to disappear whenever things seem to be going wrong. And the green-eyed asian. Ha! (Plus, she'd have to be japanese, because chinese, koreans and Japanese are all fairly snarky towards each other. Like my dad's chinese coworker who complained because he had a "korean" hair cut. it's just weird...)

Anyway, wonderful interpretation of Mary sues, and it was nice to see the Devil's Advocate, even if she was trying to end her gramatically-puritanical existence... ha!


PS: Ask me about my math final...
The Wriiter chapter 10 . 12/5/2009
“You know, your fan girls think you’re a handsome, misunderstood genius,” McCullen said.

“They are wrong,” the Doctor replied. “We do not understands why they think this. We is scarred and have nasty, stinking hair. We is much more attractive in 500 Days of Summer, yes, Precious, we is. We thinks we is downright handsome-”

HAHAHAHA! I really love this. And I love how Rex says 'has','us','we' and 'is' like that. Hilarious! :)
Ms. Catnip chapter 10 . 12/5/2009
This is so badass...

And your Sues are PERFECT, honestly, they almost seem like you took them from actual fics, lol.

*still giggling* "Fangirl-Japanese"
PhantomEmpress chapter 10 . 12/5/2009


willwrite4fics chapter 10 . 12/5/2009
Ha ha ha... sues... they're SO prevalent in this fandom, and you're hitting ALL of them! Wait.. when will one be 16, a waif, yet also the best martial artist EVEH and defeat SnakeEyes AND StormShadow without breaking a sweat, so that they can fall in LUVS with her?
Frankizzle chapter 10 . 12/5/2009
"Sayonara, sucker!" hahaha I may use that in normal conversation. And then run away :D Great chapter. Does Rex honestly have fan girls? I feel faintly sick. And I never realised the whole ice thing when I watched the movie :)
CrystalOfEllinon chapter 10 . 12/5/2009


"Falls out of chair, twitching".

Ok, Ok, I'm good...this is frikkin' hilarious. More please.
Karama9 chapter 10 . 12/5/2009

Sue-tastic, as usual. I love the comment on the ice floating. But, seriously now... Rex has fangirls? Ick. Just... ick.

And I love the green eyed asian who speaks like Yoda. I'm just surprised she didn't manage to affectionately call Storm Shadow baka or describe herself as kawaii.
Rai Science chapter 10 . 12/4/2009
Oh wow. This is funny. The Sues scare me.
PhantomEmpress chapter 9 . 11/25/2009
Hagan99 chapter 9 . 11/24/2009
Great work- I laugh with every new chapter.
Brainiac5 chapter 9 . 11/16/2009
This was a great chapter. I loved the Arctic comment, and the flashback, plus the random two writers arguing about the script. I also liked The Plot, who gave Tommy PTSD for the rest of his very short life. (Although we both know he comes back. There would be a revolt if he didn't.)

Anyway, brilliant and entertaining as always. I got weird looks from my fellow computer-lab junkies for laughing aloud...


Frankizzle chapter 9 . 11/16/2009
Hilarious, as usual :) I loved the reference to the Snake Eyes/Scarlett romance thing. Incredible. And the little Plot guy making an appearance XD lol

This will probably sound very picky, but isn't 'insure' (as in, 'I want to insure that he’s provided for...') supposed to be 'ensure'? Ridiculously pedantic, I know, but hey, its what I'm like :)
Psyk2 chapter 9 . 11/14/2009
Yeah! More 'story'! Love the accent part.
Auroris chapter 9 . 11/13/2009
Poor Storm Shadow. Even at age 10 he was being unfairly knocked around by the movie.
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