|Reviews for Symmetry|
| Alicia9876 chapter 1 . 7/14/2010
I love the statement "I have loved this man since before I knew what love was" So Brennan
| Chasing Liquor chapter 1 . 4/17/2010
This story has very interesting ideas. Clearly a lot of thought has gone into it. But I found myself quite distracted by the overuse and misuse of semicolons, to the great detriment of my reading experience. I don't want that to sound discouraging, because semicolon usage is a lost art. It would just behoove you to read up on how to use them.
| housexbonesobsession chapter 1 . 11/25/2009
Amazing. Perfect. Beautiful. I love this. This is SO in character, it's crazy. I could see it happening and I absolutely LOVE.. "I loved him before I even knew what love was" That just makes this whole fic even better because it's so true. Great, great, GREAT job! You're such an awesome writer. :)
| amber chapter 1 . 11/24/2009
i love it! lol ;D
| eitoph chapter 1 . 11/1/2009
I love the "How long?" line. There's just something about it that seems so sweet and so intense.
I picked up on the singlet thing too, just cause I live in Australia as well, but hey, it's nice to hear something familiar.
| GCatsPjs chapter 1 . 10/16/2009
Wow... That was so incredibly hot... I loved it!
| bonesparticulat chapter 1 . 10/15/2009
Well-written and sweet. Thank you!
| Shell chapter 1 . 9/6/2009
| dance. phalanges. dance chapter 1 . 9/1/2009
That was a very nice plot, and it was very well written, something which, sadly, is a change from the typical on this site. Oh well, I still read it all anyway :D I'm working on being more well-rounded in my reviews so bear with me. Good characterization with Brennan's thoughts, I might add.
| allthatisevil chapter 1 . 8/31/2009
wow... that's... I'm speechless. I mean... wow.
You're good, you're really, really good, you probably know that already, but still I need to say it.
It's very well writen. And prefectly balanced. And Newton in the middle made my day. And wow.
Honeslty, thank you for writing it.
| Stoned Snail chapter 1 . 8/30/2009
Very good. The whole story is quite atmospheric and draws you in despite the (lack of) length. ;)
| hrhdana chapter 1 . 8/27/2009
seriously, do u wrtie professionally?
can see it happening in my mind.
so glad u wrote it.
please write more.
i love this point of view.
i love the connection thay have and how lovely he is.
oh, just so great. perfect, even.
nice touch with the getting undressed on the way. hot, needy and subtle.
| Owl Emporium chapter 1 . 8/25/2009
That was pretty sweet. Great job. (:
| M. Rig chapter 1 . 8/24/2009
Agh you're killing me! Killing me! This was SO good! I love this fic so much.
Your narrator really clicked for me at this part: "Who was I to mess with office politics? I watch his strong arm extend again and again; shaking the hands of people who he either finds interesting, or finds in the path of least resistance to the bar." Least resistance to the bar amazingly perfect insight/tone.
And then, that she 'loved him before she knew what love was' was just so perfect. I gush. That line alone is so beatiful, it could stand on its own as the shortest, most satisfying fic ever.
..and NOT just because of the word singlet. LOL! LOVE IT! (*want to be alone with it, like mac 'n cheese...)
Three cheers for you.
| nopenname66 chapter 1 . 8/23/2009
Hit the green button and be kind, you say?
I say, no need! The story is wonderful, and deserves a sequel, and I thank you for taking the time to write.
Now I've got to go check out your page to find more...