|Reviews for Burning Flowers|
| Scarlett chapter 4 . 1/1/2012
Oooh, is that a 'Wicked' quote I see there? (Just for this moment as long as you're mine)
| levy120 chapter 1 . 10/6/2010
This thing made me go F-F-F-F-F-F-F all the way through. And I say that as a good thing!
What I particularly noticed from the fics of yours that I took a look at is, that they’re being… somehow connected (“Young for his Age” and “Tell me” for example). They can be read separately great, but knowing the other oneshots in the back of your mind gives it a whole different feeling yet again when reading this.
And geez, I hated this Dahlia person so much in-game, but I loved her character because I thought she was great, intriguing, dangerous… a plot bunny all over. I would have loved to see some fanfics with her causing trouble, or do some like that myself, but 3-5 killed this motivation. Like wheee “I’m sorry, but this character is dead.”
You put a nice actually plausible twist to this which I could imagine happening in canon as well so far, so I am intrigued to see how this thing goes on… so very intrigued
| Blue Deity chapter 4 . 6/3/2010
Just wanted to bump this thing up to double digits in reviews, it was annoyin gme it was sitting on nine. This is awesome, the possession parts are really well written and you convey Maya's helplessness of no longer being in control or herself quite well. The ending is terrific, even though this crisis is over, there's still so much uncertainty because of their imminent separation.
You know, you write Dahlia really well, you really should do more of it.
Well, this one's one step closer to 30 at least, going ot favorite it too, don't know why I never did that before...
| iryna chapter 4 . 2/15/2010
Baw, I loved that. Cute ending! You write Phoenix/Maya really well :3
| Moonshadow chapter 4 . 11/28/2009
I loved the reference to the urn, AG. It fits the chapters really well. And they finally kiss, that was so sweet! *bounces around*
You said to me when you came over that you're not very good at impersonating Mia and Diego's characters, but you sure did an excellent job in this short story. Every line and word was exactly how I would imagine each individual character saying it.
Great job, AGchan! This was extremely epic, and if there was ever a PW anime, then I hope something like this happens as an epilogue or something. D
o keep writing o
P.S: LOLs at Mia's disgust to the wings. "What's next, a halo?" Loved that line so much. XD XD
| icer01 chapter 4 . 11/17/2009
Amazing as before... better!
More people should write this supernatural and emotive angle of the series.
| nick nd maya 4EVA chapter 3 . 9/9/2009
MIA! YAY! SHES GOIN TO SAVE THE DAY! PLZ UPDATE IM ON THE EDGE OF MY SEAT HERE I HAVE TO NO WOTS GOIN TO HAPPEN NEXT! POOR NICK ND MAYA!
| ditto9 chapter 3 . 9/9/2009
Sorry I didn't review last time, I've grown into a bad habit of doing that lately...
This is cool, I like the dramatic turn of events, it's really good! :)
| nick nd maya 4EVA chapter 2 . 8/30/2009
ARGH DAT DAHILA! I H8 HER OH SO MUCH! UPDATE ND MAKE MIA KICK HER ASS! ND MAYA ND NICK NEED TO WEAR THEIR MAGATAMA SO THEY WONT B POSSESSED DAMN IT!
| Lolaru chapter 2 . 8/30/2009
I didn't think I could hate Dahlia any more than I did. But you've just proven me wrong. I would loves another chapter.
| RingRing chapter 1 . 8/23/2009
Oh you HAVE to update this soon. This is really good. Keep up the excellent work.
| nick nd maya FOREVER chapter 1 . 8/23/2009
OMG OMG OMG U AV TO UPDATE! DIS IS SO GD!