Reviews for Second Chance
13 Jo chapter 1 . 11/13/2010
A nice story. simple but enjoyable. Keep writing more!
LAurore chapter 1 . 9/30/2010
I like it, but well, I'd say, this deserves a sequel, don't you think ? Just a word : maybe a little rushed at the end. But great ! ;)
dizzy - in - the - izzy chapter 1 . 8/28/2009
I really can't wait for the day when he takes off his ring.

Sorry I'm just reviewing now. :).
Adiver chapter 1 . 8/24/2009
Divinia Serit chapter 1 . 8/23/2009
First off- YAY for the Jellies! I'm so excited, but I can't wait. I'm too impatient!

I really liked this one. It was a nicely done scenario for them to get together without being out of character. Nice job! I loved the spare key, and the last two lines. Good job!
Ebony10 chapter 1 . 8/23/2009
Thanks for the shoutout! :)

Loved this! Made me "aw" at the end. Yes, Lisbon should totally be his second chance. Cute.
lil smiles chapter 1 . 8/23/2009
Okay, this was wonderful!

Only one little inconsistency. Time line wise, if they're talking about Hardy, I would assume that the fic takes place shortly after the finale. If that's the case, then Jane would have had the wedding ring on his finger for no more than six years (not ten).

I know I'm being picky. But aside from that, I thought this was just lovely. And the kiss was incredibly sweet.

Thanks for the shout-out! I giggled when I saw my name. Don't know why though. Maybe I'm more hyper than I thought...

Anyhow, awesome entry! Gah, I'm going to need my mods to help me pick winners this month. You people are just too good at challenges! :P
superwoman1015 chapter 1 . 8/23/2009
This is by far one of the simplest post finally fics that I've seen. Thanks for writing, this was really nice.
Viktorija chapter 1 . 8/23/2009
It was a really sweet story:)
mwalter1 chapter 1 . 8/23/2009
Sweet! I do hope they get together.
PhoenixWytch chapter 1 . 8/23/2009
Oh I like!

Thanks for writing.
Something Simpler chapter 1 . 8/23/2009
S'all good :)

Nice little after story from that episode
Rina-the-Brave chapter 1 . 8/23/2009
Ah! This is so cute and amazing and I freaking loved it!

Tiva4evaxxx chapter 1 . 8/23/2009
Ok, first of all how is that garbage? :P

That was brilliant!

Really great :)

I loved the last line.

Now this just needs to happen on the show... *sighs*


Thanks for writing.