Reviews for Pleasantly Unexpected
January chapter 1 . 10/15/2012
;) thanks for posting
Major-Fire-Blaze chapter 1 . 5/28/2012
This was perfect. Nice sexyness.
LoveLifeForgetProblems chapter 1 . 7/17/2010
Ooohh I love this ff! You should really continue with this :)
collegegirl18 chapter 1 . 12/31/2009
cute ending. very sexy story
RedneckAngel chapter 1 . 11/12/2009
That was a really good oneshot! Very hot. I'd always wondered what it would be like for Carlisle and Bella to hook up. Love the quote "I knew I'd found my upgrade from Edward Cullen as I came down from the high of 'Round Two' with Carlisle. He could've certainly learnt a thing or five from his dad, I thought as I lay back against my pillows. I guess finally at the age of twenty-four, I was growing up... by having amazing sex with an incredibly sexy older man." Carlisle is the single most sex-hot creature that I've ever laid eyes on and you did him so much justice! :D

GreenPuma chapter 1 . 11/5/2009
Haha! I like your fic! I am writing one right now about Carlisle teaching Edward how to love a woman. It's called "The Art of Worship". Funny you allude to how Carlisle should've taught Edward a few things in your fic.
xXxlizardxXx chapter 1 . 10/14/2009
wow! that was great! i think bella and carlisle are great together! that plot was really good! well done!


bmango chapter 1 . 10/10/2009
I laughed at the Carlisle upgrade from Edward...hehehe. Maybe he should teach him a thing or 2, or Bella should just stick with the better man... ;) -b
TheDancingKiller chapter 1 . 10/10/2009
Oh God I hope you win!
Walker77 chapter 1 . 10/7/2009
That was hot, likeing bella and carlisle being matched up more and more
SweetT129 chapter 1 . 10/7/2009
I nearly died when it was Carlisle at the door instead of Edward. And when he admitted to intercepting the texts...OMG
Olivia Twisted chapter 1 . 10/6/2009
Good Job. Love it!

rameau chapter 1 . 10/3/2009
I don't smoke either, but after reading this, I feel like I should.
AnUnbrokenHorse aka RushtonElf chapter 1 . 10/3/2009
This was a really good one-shot and I really hope that you decide to continue it after the contest is over :D

Famingo chapter 1 . 9/24/2009
Wow, nice substitution! I think I would have jumped on Carlisle just like Bella if that were an option. My gods the man is beautiful! I'm sure there would be interesting aftermath with Edward when he finds out, but from the sounds of it, totally worth it.
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