Reviews for A Twist Is History |
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![]() ![]() Keep it in this story |
![]() ![]() Awsome I love it |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice |
![]() ![]() You forgot to include something which explains how Cooro knew to head to the girls' bathroom (2nd floor if I remember correctly, it's been awhile since I read that one). Kind of hard to believe that Cooro knew exactly where to go to fine Hermione and Nana without being told or overhearing the conversation as in Canon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVE this story! It's interesting how Senri talks more than he usually does. Its a nice change to know he speaks every once in a Annnyway,GREAT STORY! |
![]() ![]() ![]() About the last paragraph, there should be eight beds; as there are eight boys sleeping in the room. 1. Harry Potter 2. Seamus Finnigan 3. Dean Thomas 4. Ron Weasley 5. Neville Longbottom 6. Senri 7. Husky 8. Cooro |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dude has a point! Go Cooro! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like the uniqueness in your story! 11/10 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Kura: ...wow... Berry: love the story. :D Kura: REALLY LOVE IT! XD I wonder how they'll get home...i wonder how long they'll stay...will they stay until the end of the seventh book? That would be so cool if they participated in the war too! XD Berry: We'll read your other story. :) Kura: BYE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey. I love this story. In fact, this is my second time reading it. Anyways, I thought I'd let you know that this chapter, chapter four, has a formatting error. It's all in bold. I just thought I'd let you know, in case you wanted to fix it or something. Happy writing! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very fun and awesome story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love your story so much it's not even funny. Thanks for a great fanfic! |
![]() ![]() i have playd adventre quest |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww, I love Cooro! Although when he gets his hands on a wand we should be very afraid... Anyway, personally I think Cooro would fit best in Hufflepuff but oh well, then he'd be split from the others. *_* (who knows what trouble he'd get into without Husky jabbing him in the back every five seconds) ~Shaed |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is so cute. I can't stop smiling when I read this. |