|Reviews for A Bone To Pick|
| nightshadowfairy chapter 1 . 3/13
That... was ridiculously sad. I'm sorry to tell you, but as much as it was humor on the outside, there was a bunch of well-hidden angst in there. And it seems to be an open ending at first glance, but we both know it wasn't. No, it was very much a closed and finished ending. They both used to like each other, they both got over it, and they both made peace with it and got closure regarding it when they confessed their feelings to each other, and I'll bet you money that the most communication between them from then on is a nod of the head when passing by each other in the hallway. They move on, forget about each other and never talk again. I really almost cried, and would have if my mom and sister weren't in the room. I just find this kind of story the saddest :'(
| fictonal character chapter 1 . 7/31/2014
AHHHH NO THAT CANT BE THE END can u pleeeease write a sequel?
| Plucie chapter 1 . 10/12/2013
This was perfect and I'm in desperate need for more Al/Scor so I'm gonna go find out if you wrote more right now.
| Rainy Skye Rose chapter 1 . 9/23/2013
"YOU STOLE MY EARRING?"
"YOU WERE SUPPOSED TO BE ASLEEP!"
That line never fails to get me to crack the fuck up. Congratulations, darling. You are hilarious. And I really wanted a sequel to this, because it was actually the second fic of yours that I read (Corruption being the first, because Naynay wouldn’t shut up about it and chocolate and that chapter was delicious btw.)
| The Amazing Writer Girl chapter 1 . 7/14/2013
Omg tell me there's a sequel! O_o
| sherphy chapter 1 . 7/2/2013
cute and funny story :)
| FallenStar22 chapter 1 . 4/19/2013
I've come across a couple of your Albus/Scorpius stories now, this one and Blurred Vision.
I've really enjoyed reading them both; you've got a good clean storyline with the right balance of love and (pretend) hate between the characters. The beginning of this story was really funny too.
The only constructive comment I would give is that sometimes you don't put a comma after your first phrase and that sometimes obscures the meaning of the sentence because I read both phrases together and mix them up. Saying that, the previous sentence was not a good example and I hope that made some sense.
When I get some time I'll see if you have any other stories. :)
| Glynna chapter 1 . 9/30/2012
Wow! So super awesomely amazing. I was a bit surprised at Scorpius's bravery, but then I do feel that Draco would have instilled in him a sense of his own person, which would result in greater courage so I suppose it all works out but yes, amazing, the tension was perfect. :D
| FARISWHEEL chapter 1 . 4/26/2012
| SnarkyBubble chapter 1 . 8/26/2011
Aw loved it. Really satisfying to read :)
| Snakequeen-in-Norway chapter 1 . 7/14/2011
I've read this before, back before I had an account I think? Anyways, I obviously didn't review it then. I wanted to reread it before I read the sort of sequel. I'd forgotten they didn't actually get together in the end, though obviously they both still like each other a great deal. Hence the sequel thing.
| my name is paper YAH chapter 1 . 7/3/2011
oh that is too cute! *swoons*
| MelodyVinePotter chapter 1 . 6/29/2011
If you don't continue this, I will cry...very very hard.
| literatemermaid chapter 1 . 6/27/2011
I love this. i could see this going farther like more chapters maybe...
| lemondrops154 chapter 1 . 6/23/2011
awwwww :) :)
it's the kind of story which makes me want to flip to the next chapter to make sure the adorables (read: protagonists) get their happy ending .. but alas! there is no next chapter :) :P